Student Example #1

Ender’s Game alternate story

 In the very lively planet of SSSST, there lies a creature like no other named Patricia, Patricia is a strange creature so to say. They aren’t human, but not alien either, no one knows who or what they are. They do things… differently than others. They are a strange creature and it’s hard to explain anything about them. We’ll just have to observe them and see what happens. “Hey, Joshua how’s your day been so far? That’s great!” Explained Patricia, Alertly Patricia asks, “What is that smell? Smells like, danger” Patricia rushes toward the source of the smell. “She’ll be perfect for the role” Person 1 notifies. “Are you sure she’d the one?” questions Person 2. “She’s the best we got, have you seen the others?” replies Person 1. Patricia rushes toward the smell of the danger but as they get there they are pushed away tumbling around by the force of the strange thing that just appeared on the planet. Patricia hides behind some plants to hopefully ambush this thing. 3 things, with a similar looking silhouette to Patricia’s, came out of the strange object. Patricia watched them as they scanned the perimeter for something. Patricia blinked and just as fast as they appeared they disappeared. Patricia decided to turn back and warn the others about these creatures, but when she turned around she saw the 3 creatures right behind them. Patricia jumped back into the clearing made by the big object, just as suddenly as the creatures were behind Patricia they were surrounded by the creatures. Patricia was being cornered by the creatures and the machine as Patricia back up into the machine, just as the 3 creatures came out of the machine another bigger one came out and said, “At ease soldiers” and the other 3 suddenly put their arms at their sides and stood at attention. Patricia was just as confused as ever now knowing what to do they thought of an escape plan, they were gonna jump up on the machine and push away into the plants, but just as Patricia was about to jump the big one through a net at Patricia but Patricia got away just before it landed on them and the net fell on the other 3 creatures giving Patricia time to run away. “What were those things? Wait I better warn the others about these things” Patricia said trying to catch their breath. Patricia ran as fast as they could to warn the others. Patricia got to the others but right before Patricia got to warn them the creatures were already there waiting for Patricia. “WHAT DO YOU WANT!” yelled Patricia. “We don’t want to fight, we actually need your help with something” says the tall creature. “Then why did you try to capture me.” “Because we didn’t know if you would be peaceful, and we were gonna explain everything on out rocket.” “Still you should’ve thought of that before you tried to mess with me” “What do you mean, Patricia” “HOW DO YOU KNOW MY NAME” “We know a lot about you, like your favorite color is purple, and you are a very skilled fighter” “Ok well I don’t know how you know these things and how is my favorite color important here?” “Just so you know that we know a lot about you” “Ok so what do you want” “I need your help” “With what?” “We have a problem” “What type of problem” “We are trying to train people to help defend our planet and there is an unknown force stopping us from doing so” “And what am I supposed to do about that?” “Well for one you can help us train the others, and for another we need you to stop this unknown force” “How am I supposed to be able to do that” “well we have found that you have a supernatural ability to solve problems like this” “Ok, so what’s in it for me?” “We’ll give you a tour of our planet and you can see if you want you and your friends want to live there” “What makes you think I want to move there” “Well it’s a new place you haven’t been before with different kinds of animals and plants and it’s much more interesting than here” “Fine but your planter first then I help you” “Well that’s the problem the strange force is stopping us from going to our planet” “Fine i’ll go with you in one condition, you give me all the information I ask for” “I can’t do all the information you want because some of it’s classified but I can give you most” “Fine i’ll go with you” “Excellent, we will head out now” “Alright”. Patricia follows the 4 creatures, or as they say humans, to their rocket. Patricia boards the rocket with the 4 creatures a bit suspicious and cautious about the 4 human. “So you know everything about me but I know nothing about you guys” Patricia explains. “Ah how could we be so inconsiderate, I’m Graff, that’s Ender, Valentine, and Peter” The tall one or Graff informs. On the way to the space school Patricia get’s to know the human very well. When they finally get to the school Patricia gets a not so pleasant surprise. THE ENTIRE SCHOOL IS IN SHAMBLES! There are broken pipes, windows, walls, people are running around everywhere screaming. “WHAT HAPPENED HERE!” Yells Graff, “The thing attacked again” exclaims one of the people running around. “Don’t worry I got this” assures Patricia. Patricia sprouts vines from the ground and in only a couple of minutes the school is fully repaired. Everyone cheers for Patricia but just in case Patricia doesn’t let their guard down. For a while nothing big happens just learning on how to train the others, chilling, and a couple of problems around. “Patricia, I’ve never really asked, do you have anyone else in your life? Like family or friends?” asks Ender. “I have the friends that are on SSSST, and one other. He was different from the others like VERY different, he was also the first thing I ever saw when I awoke for the first time. He showed me everything, he showed me how to fight, dance (Kinda), and how to be kind. Then one day he left, and I never saw him again.” Explains Patricia. “Aw man that’s unfortunate. Well wanna practice our aim?” suggests Ender. “Sure” responds Patricia. Patricia and Ender practice their aim having fun with each other and Patricia finally fully trusts the human. A while passes with nothing too interesting happening, but then one day the school food and water reserve was suddenly gone and only max level clearance can get in there. Graff sen Patricia to figure out what happened. Patricia found a small hole where all the food and water went and followed where the food would’ve gone. Eventually after about an hour Patricia found the culprit. “Howard? I haven’t seen you in forever!” exclaims Patricia. “Patricia? It has been forever. What are you doing all the way out here?” questions Howard. “Well it’s a long story I’ll tell you later but right now i’m looking for something that just took all the food and water from the place I’m staying at.” “Oh, sorry that was me.” “What why would you do that?” “I’m a pig with wings pigs are normally really hungry but the wings take extra energy to use so i need lots of food.” “Oh, well couldn’t you have just asked for some food?” ‘Well I tried but they wouldn’t let me in” “Hmmm, well let’s go back and tell them the situation.” So Patricia and Howard goes back to the school and tells everyone the situation. “Ah that makes more sense.” says Graff “Well Patricia wanna go to Earth with the rest of us?” Suggests Ender. “Sure, if Howard can go with us” replies Patricia. “Ok, that’s fine with me” confirms Graff. So they all go back to Earth and have a big pool party. The End :D