By Marina Rosales Terezon
It's only been 10 days
and I already write you melodies
telling you that I miss you
I don't know how I'm going to endure a year.
The distance hurts me
it consumes me little by little
I'm slowly going crazy
I can not stop thinking about you.
I hate distance
how to forget your look
because when I'm with you
everything is better.
I do not want to be your friend anymore
I want to be your half
and be with you every day.
I wrote this poem trying to explain what a person can feel to think or want to be in love.
The main message in my poem are the feelings that a person feels that a person feels when they are in love and that when reading them people can feel identified with this feeling since this is one of the most beautiful feelings that we can feel.
The structure in my poem is description because i describe the think and feelings that persons maybe feels in this poem i talking about the love and i demonstrate in each words
In this poem I tried than when someone reads it , try to feel the feelings that I express in the poem.
The Distance is an amazing poem. I love how it makes it seem like the person in this poem is most likely almost everyone else in the world right now since the whole pandemic is causing people to not see friends and family. This is truly the work of someone who can truly understand the pain of others.
--Anthony Duarte