One of the things i found effective in this writing was the beginning  of the poet. It starts with "your voice", "your touch", "your smell" describing that this poet refers to somebody in mind in the author's point of view when writing this. One thing i noticed about the author's writing is that she's very effective and you can imagine the imagery of this poet with just so little amount of words. This poet made me think of a loneliness feeling that's in need of that significant other. 

--Brayan Rodriguez Paz

I like how you express your feelings towards that person who was with you at some point sharing moments that you may not forget, you may be able to make that person come back to you but if you do not succeed you will see that sooner or later you will overcome it and move on. 

--Rodolfo Chalico