The main message of my poem “Staying in bed” is that life can be hard at times and some days will be more complicated than others and your days might not be favored but you’ll soon realize that at the end of the day it’s not meant to be easy, mistakes are made everyday and the only thing that can be done is to try to remain calm “I try to remain calm despite the horrifying evil in my life But it seems as if the positive never wants to reach the light this may seem immersed but it’s how I feel
I want to remain motionless so I stay in my bed still “ I feel like every line in my poem is very vivid, but one that stood out,added,and put my poem all together would be “I just wish there was more I could add to my gloomy canvas Life is meant to be a roller coaster so it’s not as bad
But someday I can’t wait to look back and have a good laugh.” I say this line put it all together because I feel like it made my poem have more emotion but just in general it explains how I wish I could do more with a little bit of things that I have and how life is meant to make mistake and how you’ll have your highs and lows but it’ll all be worth the bad days, the tears, the anxieties and more.
I began explaining what has been done throughout the days and even though it might not be going how I want I really try my best to just remain calm. I started my poem with ‘Day by day, Night by night’ because I felt that starting it off like that in the beginning would grab my readers attention. I felt like the faster I got into detail the more interesting and exciting it would be!. “I want to remain motionless so I stay in my bed still and even though my days are wistful I try to keep the positive energy” I feel like my story is more described because it’s explaining how my days go and how they just fly by. “ I stay in my bed loving the peace and the whistle of the winds as the days go by”. Another way you could think of the main message is that “to be strong because there will be better days to come” something that would support that would be “Life is meant to be a roller coaster so it’s not as bad but someday I can’t wait to look back and have a good laugh.”
Some words that are important in my poem would be “ immersed”, “ motionless”, “ wistful”, and “ gloomy” because I feel like it gives my readers an idea on the feeling and the emotions while reading the poem. My poem involves a rhyme; “ even though my days aren’t favorable other days will be replaceable” it also includes two metaphors “ I just wish there was more I could add to my gloomy canvas” and "I try to keep the positive energy but it seems like it doesn’t want to be a friend of me", these phrases give my poem a huge touch they bring my reading to life and makes it even better. The tone to my story would be “Candid” , “compassionate”, and “dignified”. I feel like these words describe my poem because it is a very serious topic and it explains how I feel, why I feel that way, and how I wish things could change and just be better.
In conclusion the purpose of me writing this poem is to help me express my feelings. I feel like I did that perfectly in my poem. The main message could be many things but the main point would be “ there will be better days to come eventually”. The reason I choose to write this poem is because I really just wanted to vent in a way to where I wouldn’t give too much of my personal information but also to where I was able to get my readers to understand where I was trying to come from and how I am feeling. My poem reflects my knowledge because I feel like it’s really all I’ve dealt with all my life is just trying to stay calm and not lose myself or just sleeping my problems away I wrote this to help me express my feelings in a way I never had before. My audience would be people who’ve felt the same way. A lot of teenagers go through traumatic experiences and it can be hard to deal with and a lot of kids don’t really know how to so I wrote this poem to show that writing down what you feel can let some of the frustration, anger, hurt , etc out no matter what the cause may be. In advance thank you for reading my poem :)!!!!!!