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By-Esmeralda Hernandez Gonzalez
A mi me hace feliz mi familia estar a su lado no hay nada más hermoso que tener a mi madre y a mis hermanos a mi lado felices, la felicidad es uno de los sentimientos más bonitos, como por decir yo me siento feliz cuando hago lo que me gusta como bailar, cantar, oír mi música favorita, salir a fiesta o alguna otra parte, mojandome, estando con una persona que no es mi familia es mi amigo y lo considero de mi familia, reír con mis amigas correr por los pasillos y esa es mi felicidad, cuando este grande más grande quiero que mi felicidad sea o sea feliz porque logre mis sueños y estar bien y que mi madre este orgullosa de mi y mi padre esté orgulloso de mi desde el cielo y a mis hermanos darles apoyo de mi esas cosas son cuando yo esté feliz.
My family makes me happy to be by their side there is nothing more beautiful than having my mother and my brothers by my side happy happiness is one of the most beautiful feelings, as is to say, I feel happy when I do what I like like dancing, singing listening to my favorite music going to parties or some other part, getting wet being with a person who is my friend, but I consider him my family laugh with my friends run down the hall that’s my happiness. When I grow up I want my happiness to be, or to make me happy because I achieve my dreams and be well and that my mother is proud of me and my father is proud of me from heaven, my brothers could be supported by me those things they are reason for my happiness.
Author's Commentary
Author's Commentary
The theme that makes you happy are the things that bring happiness refers to everything that makes you happy makes you smile like being in love is a part where there is also happiness you bring your face as well as distracted and suddenly you start to think beautiful things and parts where there is happiness but other moments you are sad and everything and that and those are emotions that one brings.
Rhetorical Analysis
Rhetorical Analysis
En el ensayo “Que te hace feliz,” Esmeralda Hernandez Gonzalez me llama la atención porque la felicidad como había dicho nos hace feliz como a mi como a otras personas y es un sentimiento muy bonito es uno de los mejores sentimientos y como a mi “me gusta estar con mi familia divertirme con ellos” y es la verdad mi familia me hace feliz no hay nada mas lindo que tener a mi mamá y a mis hermanos a mi lado.
In the essay "What makes you happy," Esmeralda Hernandez Gonzalez calls my attention because happiness, as I had said, makes us happy as well as other people and it is a very beautiful feeling, it is one of the best feelings and like me " I like to be with my family to have fun with them ”and it is the truth my family makes me happy there is nothing more beautiful than having my mother and my brothers by my side.
Mi descripción de este ensayo que te hace feliz está tratando de decir que que te hace feliz una pregunta de qué es lo que te hace feliz te hace feliz estar con tu familia, con tu novio, con tu mascota, bailar, cantar, jugar juegos de mesa, estudiar, leer, no se podría ser cualquier cosa que estén haciendo y los haga feliz como dije anteriormente a mi me hace feliz estar con mi familia es lo mejor cuando estoy con ellos estoy feliz con ellos no me falta nada y esa pregunta es que te hace feliz.
My description of this essay that makes you happy is trying to say that what makes you happy a question of what makes you happy makes you happy being with your family, with your boyfriend, with your pet, dancing, singing, playing games table, study, read, it could be whatever they are doing and it makes them happy as I said before it makes me happy to be with my family is the best when I am with them I am happy with them I do not lack anything and that question it makes you happy.
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I like this essay because she says what makes her happy and how she describes everything that makes happy like her mom, her brothers, dance and many things. My favorite details in the essay is that I read this essay there are many things that make us happy like our families, friends , a song, dance. This essay make me think of the all things that make us happy, sometimes a smile make us happy. The happiness is the feelings more beautiful.
--Marina Rosales
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