Celebrating Students Learning

As I walked to school I looked at my dusty feet.

Tired, bored and exhausted I strolled to school and noticed my dusty feet dirtier than a pigsty. - Gurmannat

Although the narrow path makes me anxious, this is the only way to school. - Prisha

I was so happy.

On a bright sunny day I felt satisfied. - Adeline

On a bright sunny day satisfaction filled my body as I achieved a great grade in maths. - Prisha

I think I’m going to be late.

Beep, beep I can hear the impatient horns of the cars I know that I might be late to get to work today. - Gurmannat

Rewrite: Although the traffic to work this morning was bad, I still made it to work just on time. - Prisha

Bang, whizz the fireworks exploded.

Bang, whizz the fireworks exploded upwards into the beautiful twinkling night sky - Shahliha

Loud, colourful explosions filled the starry night sky. - Sophie

The fireworks at midnight symbolized the start of a great new year. - Prisha

• As I was driving by I saw a rustic, witchy looking house.

• The Holidays are here. We’re going out to the countryside to stay for two weeks. Mum says it's a rustic house. When I saw the house my brain went to anger mode.

• As I drove along the countryside I came across a rustic little cottage surrounded by a colourful garden.

• I stepped out of the forest and saw a beautiful but rustic enchanted looking cottage.