Treatment Feedback

1. Open your preproduction document with the treatment questions, title it "DateLastnameDocumentary"

2. Click share, then change the share preferences to public on the web, then check off  "Anyone can edit".

3. Copy the highlighted link.

4. Go to this form to paste the link.

Work on your treatment today.  You can get informal feedback from your peers or from Mr. P.  4 (or more) pages are due tomorrow (80pts)

on Friday:

Start with your own treatment. 

First copy the following questions and paste at the bottom of the page with your name as a heading.

• • What is your personal interest in this topic? In other words, how does it affect you?

  • What are some specific questions that you have about this topic that you would like to explore? (List at least 3)

  • Who would be interested in watching a documentary about this topic? Why would they be interested?

  • Who could be interviewed about their personal story related to this topic? (think people most involved, professionals, celebrities, local media, organizations, parents and family members, ect...)

  • Where could you capture strong images to go with this topic?

Answer the questions 25 pts- 5 per answer

Next

Go here to find the links to your classmates treatment.

Read each treatment one at a time. 

Copy and paste the questions at the bottom of the page with your name as a heading; below the last person who left feedback. 

Answer the questions as detailed as you can.  Please don't rush through this.  This helps clarify thoughts and sparks new ideas.  It is one of the most collaborative and important steps in planning your document.

25 points each treatment (5 points per answer)= 350 points including your own.

Review the feedback left on your treatment and answer these questions:

• • What was the best or most helpful feedback?  Copy and paste it below this question and respond to what you copied and pasted.  Why was it helpful?

  • Consider the audiences viewpoint (classmates leaving feedback should have helped with this). Was there any feedback that you did not consider when you initially wrote the treatment?  Will it change how you move forward with production, why or why not?

(50pts)