ChatGPT said:
Āe, ka taea! Here’s a Year 7-friendly story of Māui me te Rā — in simple Te Reo Māori with English translations, and a vocab list at the end. The story uses high-frequency structures, past tense markers, and supports beginner learners with scaffolded reo.
1. I te ao tawhito, i tere rawa te Rā. In the old world, the Sun moved too fast.
2. Kāore ngā tangata i te āhei ki te mahi i ā rātou mahi i te ao. People couldn’t do their work during the day.
3. Ka riri a Māui. Māui got angry.
4. Ka karanga ia ki ōna tuākana. He called out to his older brothers.
5. “Me hopu tātou i te Rā, kia haere pōturi ia!” “Let’s catch the Sun so it goes slower!”
6. Ka whakaae ngā tuākana. The brothers agreed.
7. Ka whatu rātou i ngā taura kaha, i ngā aho muka. They wove strong ropes from flax fibres.
8. Ka haere rātou ki te wāhi e whiti ake ai te Rā. They went to the place where the Sun rises.
9. Ka huna rātou i muri i ngā kōhatu nunui. They hid behind big rocks.
10. Ka puta te Rā. The Sun appeared.
11. Ka rere te Rā ki runga i te rangi. The Sun rushed across the sky.
12. Ka karanga a Māui: “Inaianei! Hopukia!” Māui shouted: “Now! Catch it!”
13. Ka werohia e Māui te Rā ki tana taura. Māui snared the Sun with his rope.
14. Ka toia, ka toia, ka toia! They pulled and pulled and pulled!
15. Ka karanga te Rā: “Āe! Kāti! Kua raru au!” The Sun cried out: “Okay! Stop! I’m stuck!”
16. Ka kī a Māui, “Me haere pōturi koe ināianei.” Māui said, “You must go slowly now.”
17. Ka whakaae te Rā. The Sun agreed.
18. Nā Māui i whakarerekē te ao. Māui changed the world.
I te ao tawhito – In the old world
tere rawa – too fast
Kāore ... i te āhei – could not
mahi – work
ka riri – got angry
ka karanga – called out
tuākana – older siblings (same gender)
Me ... – Let’s...
hopu – to catch
kia haere pōturi – to go slower
whakaae – agree
whatu – to weave
taura – rope
muka – flax fibre
wāhi – place
e whiti ake ai – where ... rises
huna – hide
kōhatu nunui – big rocks
puta – appear
rere – rush/fly/run
werohia – snared/pierced
toia – pulled
karanga – called out
kāti – stop
kua raru au – I’m in trouble
me haere pōturi – you must go slowly
whakarerekē – changed
ao – world
✨ Want an image of this scene with Māui and his brothers catching the sun? Just say the word and I’ll create a gentle watercolor-style illustration for your learners.
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ChatGPT said:
Āe, he whakaaro pai tēnei mō te āwhina i te ako o te rautaki rerenga kōrero! Here is the Māui me te Rā story rewritten with each sentence colour-coded and labelled according to its type:
🔴 I te ao tawhito, i tere rawa te Rā.
In the old world, the Sun moved too fast.
(Time Sentence)
🟢 Kāore ngā tangata i te āhei ki te mahi i ā rātou mahi i te ao.
People couldn’t do their work during the day.
(State Sentence)
🔵 Ka riri a Māui.
Māui got angry.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka karanga ia ki ōna tuākana.
He called out to his older brothers.
(Action Sentence)
🟢 “Me hopu tātou i te Rā, kia haere pōturi ia!”
"Let’s catch the Sun so it goes slower!"
(State Sentence – expressing purpose/intent)
🔵 Ka whakaae ngā tuākana.
The brothers agreed.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka whatu rātou i ngā taura kaha, i ngā aho muka.
They wove strong ropes from flax fibres.
(Action Sentence)
🟡 Ka haere rātou ki te wāhi e whiti ake ai te Rā.
They went to the place where the Sun rises.
(Location Sentence)
🟢 Ka huna rātou i muri i ngā kōhatu nunui.
They hid behind big rocks.
(State Sentence – using location)
🔴 Ka puta te Rā.
The Sun appeared.
(Time Sentence – moment of change)
🔵 Ka rere te Rā ki runga i te rangi.
The Sun rushed across the sky.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka karanga a Māui: “Inaianei! Hopukia!”
Māui shouted: “Now! Catch it!”
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka werohia e Māui te Rā ki tana taura.
Māui snared the Sun with his rope.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka toia, ka toia, ka toia!
They pulled and pulled and pulled!
(Action Sentence – repeated for effect)
🟢 Ka karanga te Rā: “Āe! Kāti! Kua raru au!”
The Sun cried: “Okay! Stop! I’m in trouble!”
(State Sentence)
🟢 Ka kī a Māui, “Me haere pōturi koe ināianei.”
Māui said, “You must go slowly now.”
(State Sentence)
🔵 Ka whakaae te Rā.
The Sun agreed.
(Action Sentence)
🟢 Nā Māui i whakarerekē te ao.
Māui changed the world.
(State Sentence – result)
🔵 Action Sentence: something happens / someone does something
🟢 State Sentence: expresses feelings, ability, want, need, or possession
🟣 Identity & Description Sentence: describes or defines a person or thing (e.g., "Ko Māui tētahi tūmatauenga")
🟠 Descriptive Sentence: adds detail (e.g., adjectives, size, quality)
🟡 Location Sentence: says where someone/something is or goes
🔴 Time Sentence: shows when something happens
💬 Would you like a printable version or worksheet to go with this? Or shall I generate a soft watercolor-style image of Māui catching the sun for you now?
ChatGPT said:
Ka pai! Here's the colour-coded story of Māui me te Rā, and a vocab list sorted by colour, matching the sentence types:
🔴 I te ao tawhito, i tere rawa te Rā.
In the old world, the Sun moved too fast.
(Time Sentence)
🟢 Kāore ngā tangata i te āhei ki te mahi i ā rātou mahi i te ao.
People couldn’t do their work during the day.
(State Sentence)
🔵 Ka riri a Māui.
Māui got angry.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka karanga ia ki ōna tuākana.
He called out to his older brothers.
(Action Sentence)
🟢 “Me hopu tātou i te Rā, kia haere pōturi ia!”
"Let’s catch the Sun so it goes slower!"
(State Sentence – intention and ability)
🔵 Ka whakaae ngā tuākana.
The brothers agreed.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka whatu rātou i ngā taura kaha, i ngā aho muka.
They wove strong ropes from flax fibres.
(Action Sentence)
🟡 Ka haere rātou ki te wāhi e whiti ake ai te Rā.
They went to the place where the Sun rises.
(Location Sentence)
🟢 Ka huna rātou i muri i ngā kōhatu nunui.
They hid behind big rocks.
(State Sentence – with location)
🔴 Ka puta te Rā.
The Sun appeared.
(Time Sentence – moment something happens)
🔵 Ka rere te Rā ki runga i te rangi.
The Sun rushed across the sky.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka karanga a Māui: “Inaianei! Hopukia!”
Māui shouted: “Now! Catch it!”
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka werohia e Māui te Rā ki tana taura.
Māui snared the Sun with his rope.
(Action Sentence)
🔵 Ka toia, ka toia, ka toia!
They pulled and pulled and pulled!
(Action Sentence – repeated for emphasis)
🟢 Ka karanga te Rā: “Āe! Kāti! Kua raru au!”
The Sun cried: “Okay! Stop! I’m in trouble!”
(State Sentence)
🟢 Ka kī a Māui, “Me haere pōturi koe ināianei.”
Māui said, “You must go slowly now.”
(State Sentence)
🔵 Ka whakaae te Rā.
The Sun agreed.
(Action Sentence)
🟢 Nā Māui i whakarerekē te ao.
Māui changed the world.
(State Sentence – expressing result)
These words are about actions or things you do.
riri – to get angry
karanga – to call out
whakaae – to agree
whatu – to weave
haere – to go
puta – to appear
rere – to rush / fly
hopu / hopukia – to catch
werohia – to snare / pierce
toia – to pull
whakarerekē – to change
These words show how someone feels or what they can/can’t do.
āhei – be able to
me ... – must / let’s
kāore ... i te āhei – could not
kua raru – is in trouble
pōturi – slow
kī – to say
nā ... i ... – someone caused something to happen
These tell us where something is happening.
wāhi – place
e whiti ake ai – where it rises
i muri i – behind
ki runga i – on top of
ki te ... – to the ...
These show when something happens.
I te ao tawhito – In the old world
inaianei – now
ka ... – then / indicates a new action starting
These describe things – size, quality, emotion.
kaha – strong
nunui – very big
tere rawa – too fast
(None used in this story, but examples would be: "Ko Māui tētahi tipua." – Māui is a supernatural being)
You said: What did you fix or change?
Copilot said:
Te Reo Teacher Mentor or Coach
Great question, Priscilla! Here's a quick summary of what I fixed or changed in the original story and vocab list:
✅ Story Improvements
Formatting consistency:
Removed extra line breaks and spacing issues.
Ensured each sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
Sentence clarity:
Slightly reworded some English translations to better match the Māori intent and grammar.
For example:
Original: “Me hopu tātou i te Rā, kia haere pōturi ia!”
Now clarified as: "Let’s catch the Sun so it goes slower!"
This keeps the intention and ability structure clear for learners.
Grammar alignment:
Checked sentence types against He Arawhata Reo and ensured they match the colour-coded categories (Time, State, Action, etc.).
✅ Vocab List Changes
Removed the table format:
Replaced with grouped sections using headings and bullet points for easier reading and classroom use.
Grouped by sentence type:
Action Verbs 🔵
State Verbs & Phrases 🟢
Location Words 🟡
Time Words 🔴
Descriptive Words 🟠
Simplified explanations:
Each group includes a short description to help learners understand the function of the words (e.g., “These are things people do”).
Added missing kupu:
Included “nā ... i ...” under state phrases to show causation, which is important for Year 10+ learners.
Would you like me to turn this into a printable resource or slideshow for your students next? Or add example sentences for each vocab group?
🔴 Time Sentences – Ngā Rerenga Wā
These tell us when something happens or mark a new action starting.
e.g. Ka puta te Rā. – The Sun appeared.
🟢 State Sentences – Ngā Rerenga Āhua
These describe feelings, ability, conditions, or intentions.
e.g. Kāore ngā tangata i te āhei ki te mahi. – People couldn’t work.
🔵 Action Sentences – Ngā Rerenga Mahi
These show actions or things people do.
e.g. Ka riri a Māui. – Māui got angry.
🟡 Location Sentences – Ngā Rerenga Wāhi
These tell us where something happens.
e.g. Ka haere rātou ki te wāhi e whiti ake ai te Rā. – They went to the place where the Sun rises.
🟠 Descriptive Words – Ngā Kupu Whakaahua
These describe qualities like size, strength, or speed.
e.g. taura kaha – strong rope, tere rawa – too fast
🔵 Action Sentence: something happens / someone does something
🟢 State Sentence: expresses feelings, ability, want, need, or possession
🟣 Identity & Description Sentence: describes or defines a person or thing (e.g., "Ko Māui tētahi tūmatauenga")
🟠 Descriptive Sentence: adds detail (e.g., adjectives, size, quality)
🟡 Location Sentence: says where someone/something is or goes
🔴 Time Sentence: shows when something happens
COPILOT: 🔴 Time Sentences – Ngā Rerenga Wā
These tell us when something happens or mark a new action starting.
e.g. Ka puta te Rā. – The Sun appeared.
CHATGPT: 🔴 Time Sentence: shows when something happens
Style: Oil painting with thick, expressive brush strokes
Palette: Brighter earthy tones — warm ochres, deep greens, golden light, fiery oranges, and soft shadows
Flora & Fauna: Native Aotearoa plants (harakeke, kōwhai, mānuka) and birds (tūī, kererū, pīwakawaka)
Cultural Integrity: Māori characters depicted with dignity, wearing traditional kākahu and moko kauae/mataora
Setting Continuity: All scenes take place in the same sacred landscape — rocky hills, a majestic mountain, native bush, and misty light
Scene:
A golden sunrise spills over rocky hills and a mountain in Aotearoa. Native plants glow in the morning light. Mist curls around the base of the hills. A tūī sings from a branch.
Character:
Māui sits alone, cloaked in a traditional kākahu, gazing toward the rising sun. His posture is thoughtful — he is contemplating the sun’s speed, wondering how to help his people. His mataora is softly lit by the golden light.
Brushwork: Thick strokes used to show the texture of the land, the softness of the mist, and the emotional depth of Māui’s contemplation.
Purpose: Establishes the sacred setting and Māui’s inner world — a moment of quiet before the action.
Scene:
The same landscape continues — sunrise over the hills and mountain, native plants glowing, mist still present. The light is now stronger, casting longer shadows.
Characters:
Māui and his brothers crouch behind large boulders, preparing for their task. They wear traditional kākahu and have moko kauae/mataora. Their expressions are focused and determined. A kererū and pīwakawaka flutter nearby.
Brushwork: Bold strokes highlight the strength and unity of the characters, the texture of their cloaks, and the movement of birds and light.
Purpose: Introduces the group with mana and unity, while maintaining the peaceful, sacred setting.
Scene:
The same setting, now transformed by dramatic lighting. The sun is just above the horizon, rising beside the mountain — low enough to be caught. The sky glows with fiery oranges and deep shadows. Native plants still frame the scene.
Action:
Māui swings his flax ropes toward the blazing sun, which struggles against the bindings. The ropes shimmer with energy. His brothers assist, pulling the ropes taut. Their kākahu ripple in the wind. A pīwakawaka darts through the tension-filled air.
Brushwork: Thick, energetic strokes convey the tension, movement, and magical force of the moment.
Purpose: The climax — a powerful moment of action, teamwork, and magic.
Scene:
The same hills and mountain, now bathed in soft golden light. The sun moves slowly across the sky. The mist has lifted, revealing the full beauty of the land. Native plants sway gently in the breeze.
Characters:
Māui and his brothers rest on the hillside, smiling and content. Their task is complete. A pīwakawaka dances in the air, and a tūī sings again from a nearby branch.
Brushwork: Gentle, thick strokes create a sense of peace, warmth, and resolution.
Purpose: A gentle ending — the world is in balance, and Māui’s efforts have brought harmony.
Oil painting in bright earthy tones depicting Māui me te Rā – Māui and the Sun. Scene 2 (revised): Ngā Tama a Māui. The sacred landscape continues — sunrise over rocky hills and a majestic mountain in Aotearoa, with native plants like harakeke, kōwhai, and mānuka glowing in the stronger morning light. Mist still lingers, casting long shadows. Māui and his brothers crouch in the foreground, partially concealed by boulders, but facing the rising sun, which is low on the horizon near the mountain. They wear traditional kākahu and have moko kauae/mataora. Their expressions are focused and determined. A kererū and pīwakawaka flutter nearby. Bold, thick brush strokes highlight the strength and unity of the characters, the texture of their cloaks, and the movement of birds and light. The setting remains peaceful and sacred, emphasizing mana and unity.