Week 6: Design Draft
Making Abstract Sculpture
Design Draft 1
Describe your intentions and process plan.
WHAT am I making: building
HOW do I plan to do this: use wires
WHY (intention): so that i can show people my artwork
Week 7 to 10: Process Photos of Wire Sculpting
From 2D to 3D
frame
frame
frame with roof
frame with roof
added rings to some corners
added rings to some corners
added rings to all corners
added rings to all corners
FINAL PRESENTATION
Frontal (on flat surface)
Title of Work: Tower of balls
Year: 2024
Medium:
Dimensions: 3
Artist Statement: i am trying to represent a house. i was inspired by a simple house. i imagined the house in my mind.
Other View 1
Other View 2
Peer Feedback
Use of Positive Language to Nurture and Empower
ONE PRAISE: 30 WORDS
The structure is creative and it is 3D, uses many different elements too. The structure's knots are also tied nicely there is not sharp wires. It uses many different shapes to form the structure
Highlight the positive words used.
ONE POLISH: 30 WORDS
It was mostly done by 1 person and the base of the structure can be better like flatter and could be more stable. The wires coiled at the side of the structure could also be coiled neater.
Describe the value-addedness to the impact of your peer's work based on your suggestion.
Team Review by Individuals
you lyang:
What I have done
Ideation: i did the whole artwork by myself
Implementation: i cut the wires and tied them together to make the artwork
Reflection (30 words)
I Used to Think: that it was hard to do the artwork
...but Now i Think: it is much easier to do the artwork
Name 2:
What I have done
Ideation:
Implementation:
Reflection (30 words)
I Used to Think:
...but Now i Think:
Name 3: (if any)
What I have done
Ideation:
Implementation:
Reflection (30 words)
I Used to Think:
...but Now i Think:
Mentor's Feedback (to be completed by your teacher)
PRAISE:
It is good to persever with or without a partner's help. Shows that you have good focus and resilience.
POLISH:
You could always do more with a better assistant. The ideation was a little plain to begin with, organic forms (natural forms) are easier to incorporate than geometric ones.