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Mrs Buchanan
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Writing a formal email
Walt: write a formal email.
Walt: use correct sentence punctuation.
Video
Instructions:
How do we go about writing a formal email? Let's talk through some examples and share our ideas.
Your task is to write a formal email in your presentation.
Publish to your blog: Personal title, Labels: 2017, Writing, Email, Guardians of the Galaxy,
Writing template
Image
What did we do at Stardome? - recount
Walt: write a recount about a personal experience.
Walt: use correct sentence punctuation.
Video
Instructions:
What did you do at Stardome? What did you enjoy?
1. Have a chat about it with a buddy and as a class.
2. Use our template to plan and record the ideas you want to recount.
3. Write your recount in full sentences underneath your plan.
4. Read your writing carefully to check that your ideas match your plan.
Then, read it again to check that it each sentence makes sense.
5. Ask a buddy to read your recount. Do they have any feedback for you?
6. Create a drawing/image to represent your experience.
7. Publish to your blog: Personal title, Labels: 2017, Writing, Recount, Stardome
We want our recounts to
share our personal experience and be interesting for our audience.
Writing template
Word bank
Image
The colours of light
Walt: explain how and why something happens.
Video
Instructions:
The sun lights up our world. What makes the sky blue? Why does the colour of the sky change at sunset? What can we learn about other planets from this?
We will watch a video and then carry out an experiment to see what happens to the colour of light.
After we have talked about what we have seen, you will complete a writing activity.
Labels: 2017, Literacy, Writing, Inquiry, Light, Guardians of the Galaxy,
Writing activity
Youtube video
Images
Attribution:
Youtube: Public Domain TV 13 July 2012
Youtube: Science Beyond 1 December 2011
Image retrieved from Wikimedia: BrendelSignature at English Wikipedia [GFDL (http://www.gnu.org/copyleft/fdl.html) or CC BY 3.0 (http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons
Animation - Voice Over
Walt: make connections between spoken, written and visual language.
Walt: use correct sentence punctuation.
Instructions:
How is your animation looking? Have you thought about what you are going to say in your voice over?
During writing this week, you are going to work on creating a script for your animation. You will be able to turn this script into your voice over.
Remember to include:
- Your story about Guardians of the Galaxy - leaving Earth and exploring
the universe outside Earth for somewhere new to live.
- Adjectives to make your writing interesting.
Read your script carefully to check that it makes sense. Read it again to check your punctuation (capital letters, full stops, question marks).
Finished? Share your animation script on your blog with a screenshot from your animation.
What would you take to space?
Walt: write our ideas using complex sentences.
Video
Instructions:
Imagine you have just been asked to join astronaut Chris Hadfield on a mission on the International Space Station. What would you put in your astronaut suitcase or kete? Why?
Talk to a buddy about the objects you might want to take to space. Then it is time to choose your words and put them in your astronaut suitcase!
Labels: 2017, Literacy, Writing, Sentences, Guardians of the Galaxy,
Kete template
Writing template
Toolkit: sentences
Attribution:
Youtube: Canadian Space Agency 31 March 2013
What is a solar eclipse?
Walt: use paragraphs in our writing to organise our ideas.
Walt: explain a natural event.
Instructions:
Our inquiry is moving its focus from planet Earth to the place of the planets within the solar system. How exciting then that for the first time in many years, there was a total solar eclipse across America yesterday (earlier today New Zealand time). The earth became dark during the middle of the day. What caused this to happen?
We will talk about and watch some videos that explain this natural event. Your task is to write to explain how a total solar eclipse happens.
Labels: 2017, Literacy, Writing, Explanation, Solar Eclipse, Guardians of the Galaxy,
What help do you need with your writing?
Fill out this form!
Planning and Writing Doc
Padlet with
Word bank and Sentence Starters
Can I use that image?
Attribution:
Youtube: , NASA, 9 August 2017
Youtube: McGraw-Hill Eduction, 10 August 2017
Youtube: National Geographic, 18 August 2017
Earth's Natural Resources
Walt: use paragraphs in our writing to organise our ideas.
Wal: how and why water, air and soil are necessary for life on Earth.
Instructions:
Why are we able to live on Earth?
What is essential for our survival on Earth?
What are the features of Planet Earth that enable us to live here?
Instructions:
Take part in the post-it-note task.
Contribute to the padlet.
Plan and write about Earth’s natural resources.
Take photos or draw pictures of each of the natural resources you have written about.
Post your writing onto your blog.
Labels: 2017, Writing, Explanation, Planet Earth, Guardians of the Galaxy,
What help do you need with your writing?
Fill out this form!
Planning and Writing Doc
Padlet
Animation
Attribution:
Youtube: What's the dirt on...dirt? (SciShow Kids), 6 May 2015
Youtube: Why is water important for life? (Appuseries), 5 January 2015
Youtube: Science video for kids; Natural Resources of the Earth (Turtlediary) - 4 April 2016
Narrative writing: To infinity and beyond
Walt: tell a story using a variety of sentences of different lengths; and
Walt: ask for feedback to help us make changes that add impact to our story.
Instructions:
Earlier in the year we learnt about Kaitīakitanga i nga wā kātoa, being guardians of everything around us. Now we are exploring being Guardians of the Galaxy. What adventures will there be as we search for new planets in the galaxy? What kind of planet is there to be found? Can a spaceship land there? Can people live there?
What kind of story will you tell? Myth, legend, adventure, sci-fi? Whatever kind of story, there is always a problem to be sorted out by the main characters. There is a template to help you decide on your characters and setting. We will talk about this together.
When you have finished, read your story carefully. Does it make sense? Do your sentences have different beginnings? Have you checked your punctuation?
Read your story to a buddy. What feedback do they have for you? Share your presentation to your blog. Labels: 2017, Writing, narratives, Guardians of the Galaxy, To infinity and beyond.
We will also be learning about different types of sentences.
Video
Word bank
Task
Grammar Activity
Video
Task (2)
If you have finished your Guardians of the Galaxy story, check out Captain Taniwha's video. It is the beginning of a story.
How would you finish the story? Have a chat with a buddy. In a Google doc, write what happens next in the story and how it ends. Remember
* Does it make sense?
* Different length sentences?
* Check your sentence punctuation.
Create an image to support your story using Pixlr. Publish your story and image to your blog. Labels: 2017, Writing, Narrative, Capt Taniwha, Guardians of the Galaxy