Response to Persuasive Text
Planning Sheet
Paragraph 1: Write an interesting opening that identifies the source, form of persuasion intended audience, and the claim the text is making.
Source (includes author): “Energy Can Be Saved Without Trading in Health” by Kurt T. Johnson
Bangor Daily News 1/25/12
Form of persuasion: essay
Intended audience: consumers, mostly people in market for or living in super insulated homes
Claim: Super insulated homes need good ventilation to avoid many health issues.
Paragraph 2: Provide examples of why you believe the claim is or is not justified based on your ability to locate information.
Is the claim supported? yes
Examples (information, etc.) from the text that supports the claim OR that does not support the claim.
Toxins from mold and moisture build up and may cause allergies.
Radon builds up in the air. This is a cancer risk. 76% of homes in Androscoggin and Cumberland counties had radon levels high enough to require action.
Formaldehyde is a carcinogen. It is used in building materials, carpeting, furniture, etc. The fumes can build up in the air and produce toxic levels in a tight house.
Paragraph 3: Analyze the writer's reasoning and identify how the information constructs support and/or is misleading.
Strategies used: statistics
specific examples of problems
How does the information construct support OR how does it mislead the audience?
Clearly shows how lack of ventilation can lead to health problems. Uses examples of things commonly found in homes.
Organized in bullets, makes it easier to digest info.
Compares to European countries.
Paragraph 4: Write a conclusion that evaluates the effectiveness of the persuasive piece.
How effective was this piece? Very effective
Reasons for your answer: Made me think about the subject. Particular section about baby furniture and formaldehyde caused me to take notice. New baby due in my family. I would want to make sure the baby's room is well ventilated.