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Fiafia 2016
Walt: Retell our experience of Fiafia
WILF: I can use interesting words and write detailed paragraphs
My writing has an introduction, middle and a conclusion
Instructions
You are going to write a recount of your experience of Fiafia.
Lots of schools don't have Fiafia and this is your chance to tell them what it is all about.
Planning:
Introduction: How often do we have Fiafia? What groups are there? How often did we practice?
Paragraph Two:
What group were you in? What songs/ items did you perform and learn? Tell us more about your group?
Paragraph Three:
What was your favourite group and why? Any other groups.
Paragraph Three:
Summarise your thoughts. How did you feel about Fiafia? What are you going to join next time if there is a Fiafia?
Remember: you do not embed your writing. You copy and paste it to your blog
Year 5 and 6 Camp
WALT: Retell our experience of camp
WILF: I can use interesting words and write detailed paragraphs
My writing has an introduction, middle and a conclusion
Instructions:
1. Click on the year 5 & 6 camp link (on the right) to complete the task.
2. You are to create a presentation recounting all of the amazing things that you did while you were on camp last week.
Remember to include as many important details when recounting camp. That way your audience will understand all of your experiences. You want your audience to feel like they were on camp with you.
Make sure to make your presentation look professional and interesting. Use different colours, backgrounds and photos.
Don’t forget to delete all notes on each page before you publish your presentation on your blog! :)
Easter Break Writing
Introduction - Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?
Paragraphs 2 and 3 - Include details of the activities you took part in, your point of view should be clear in these paragraphs
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion. Describe how you felt. Did you enjoy camp? What are you hoping to do in your next camp?
If you didn't go to camp you're going to write about what you did in the long weekend during the Easter break.
Dictagloss
WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing
Instructions:
Listen carefully to Miss Lavakula when she reads out the paragraph. Your job is to write down each sentence word for word and punctuate as you go.
Punctuation marks include: fullstops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, question marks and so forth.
Fast finishers: Use sumopaint to draw a picture to go with your paragraph that you have written.
Remember we will mark together. Give yourself a mark of how well you did.
WALT: Recraft a paragraph
WILF: I can add detail and use interesting words
Instructions:
Read and think critically of the following paragraph. What can you see that needs fixing? How can we tighten up the sentences to make it interesting for our audience to read?
WALT: Narrate a story about a pirate, on an island and treasure is found
WILF: I can add detail and use interesting words
Instructions:
Write one paragraph for your orientation - include details, pirate's name, describe the pirate's character, was he/she by him/ herself. How did they come across an island?
Narratives
WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing
Instructions:
Listen carefully to Miss Lavakula when she reads out the paragraph. Your job is to write down each sentence word for word and punctuate as you go.
Punctuation marks include: fullstops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, question marks and so forth.
Narrative Writing
WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word
WILF: I can write down the sounds in words I hear and I can punctuate my writing
Instructions:
Listen carefully to Miss Lavakula when she reads out the paragraph. Your job is to write down each sentence word for word and punctuate as you go.
Punctuation marks include: fullstops, capital letters, commas, speech marks, question marks and so forth.
Narrative Practice
Walt: Narrate a story that includes an orientation, problem and solution
Success Criteria:
Can identify the problem and solution
Writing Paragraphs
The Three Little Pigs
Walt: Describe characters from the Three Little Pigs
Instructions
Make a copy of your writing doc and file it into your writing folder
Focus is on a narrative
What is a narrative?
All About Me Blurb
Walt: Write a brief description about myself to post to my blog.
Instructions:
Check out some examples here to get an idea of what your blurb should look like and sound like
Open your doc, make a copy and start writing your description.
Include details about your age, your favourite sports, subjects, hobbies and things that tell visitors to your blog more about you.
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