August 2024 Submissions:
A Long Way Home - Addison Daily [Montessori Academy for Peace, 8th Grade]
This was a deeply emotional tale, from nostalgia to heartbreak. It struck a sharp contrast between the narrator’s (Gwen) warm memories with Maggie and the painful present she experienced with her father. It showed the reader how in the midst of these struggles, it doesn't hurt to have someone around for support. The story effectively demonstrated the themes of loss and friendship, supported by Maggie's supportiveness and Gwen's inability to cope with her father's failures. The element of scenery detail and heartfelt emotions drove me deep within the world of Gwen. Overall, the author’s narrative was an amazing account of the effects of change and strength derived from true friendship and really touched my heart. Recommended for slightly mature audiences (middle school and up).
The Bench in the Woods - Kathryn Steele [Desert Ridge Middle School, 7th Grade]
This story was long, yet sweet. I enjoyed the fact how the main character, Harmony, turned from a lone girl into a beloved musician with deep connections with her audience. Secret performances in the forest, supportive advice from her father, and touching gifts from children packed together an exceptional story of purpose and connection. The most touching moments were her emotional reunion with her parents, the real effect her music had on the children, and her determination to return to the forest despite her success. The story was beautifully told of how one person can make a huge difference in the lives of others through her passion and kindness and is one that I think can make a great impact on others. Recommended for all grades.