Today's task you are going to go back onto your doc and respond to my feedback/ next steps I've given. If you have done the task after 4pm you won't have feedback and for those of you who didn't do the task yesterday need to make up for it today. Make sure you are using:
-Ambitious vocabulary
- At least one simile and metaphor
-Precise adjectives that create imagery in the readers head.
Some great examples I've read so far:
Hello stiff school uniform and looking identical to everyone else. Baranby,
Goodbye to the days of imagining about if unicorns were real, and thinking the world wasn't so cruel. Ella