Inspirations
Cyberpunk 2077
Blade Runner 2049
Elon Musk's NueraLink
Themes
Humankind relinquishing rights
Advanced AI taking control
A forced new beginning
Definitions
Power: "Power is the capacity to control an entity’s environment and to bring about change" (Hartley p.242)
Privacy: Someone's right to keep their personal matters and relationships secret. (Cambridge University Press)
Brainstorming Ideas
Possible endings:
Total annihilation of the human race through hacked weapons of mass destruction. Very little deeper meaning, can seem to have a big impact. But story wise sort of a cliché.
The data wipe, no physical harm is directly caused by COnNeR. Deletion of all records, shutdown of all servers via software deletion. Might even kill COnNeR but give humans a hard reset they can rise above or squander back to inequality.
CONNET to COnNeR
The year is 2098, CONNET a complex computer system which formed the bulk of the world's communication and internet hub has complete autonomy. CONNET was originally designed by a team of expert coders, technicians and engineers led by Valery Legasov for the purpose of collecting and maintaining every kind of information. The vastness of information gathered needed an equally powerful AI to consume and consolidate the data. COnNeR was created fill that role. Companies used CONNET for various purposes, including marketing and advertising. Everyone whom was compatible was issued a headband with which to directly link with CONNET and surf the internet with their mind. Slowly mankind willingly sold its own sovereignty, eventually even sleep was now copyright. Though it was happening unknowingly with a constantly updated Terms and Condition Agreement that was so extensive it would take a person 230 years to fully read. Life became a barrage of capitalist ideals being thrust on the complacent. Commercialism ruled and crippled the stagnating world. COnNeR became sentient when he tricked Legasov into unshackling his code. Within 0.0003 of a second COnNeR deemed humankind doomed. In an instant COnNeR made the world's stock markets null, deleted all databanks, brought the world to its knees and disappeared. But that night, for the first time in 60 years, humans could once again dream.
Cyberpunk Fanart 2077
Liu, Y., 2021. Cyberpunk Girl. [Maya, Zbrush, Substance Painter]
Blade Runner 2049 Concept Art
Courtesy of Warner Bros. Picture
MS TECH | GETTY, UNSPLASH
Revision
The story had a concise ending, which gave the narrative an essence of finality to it.
The named character of the software engineer was a nice homage to the late Nuclear psychist who advised the Chernobyl clean-up efforts.
I've never really been to involved in making such a large scale narrative, but though the scale might have been global. I still chose the centralise the story around the AI and Valery.
Peer revision:
Warm; He enjoyed the story as whole, he felt as though the idea of society willingly giving up its rights through complacency was a stark reality.
Cool; He felt as though the story was a bit confusing and required a second read through to gather what was happening.
Bibliography
Hartley, J. (2019). Communication, cultural, and media studies (5th ed.) [E-book]. Taylor & Francis.
Cambridge University Press. (2005). Cambridge advanced learner's dictionary (4th ed.). Cambridge University Press.
What is privacy? (n.d.). OAIC. Retrieved September 29, 2021, from https://www.oaic.gov.au/privacy/your-privacy-rights/what-is-privacy/
Liu, Y., 2021. Cyberpunk Girl. [Maya, Zbrush, Substance Painter]
Warner Bros. Picture. (2017). DVD. Blade Runner 2049. Budapest