Writing

Kid Power: Persuade to Change

WALT use persuasive language features to write a persuasive letter

Success Criteria

  • use at least 3 different persuasive language features
  • include 3 points to support your change
  • use a hook to grad attention
  • summarise your main points in the conclusion
  • follow the format for a persuasive letter

Activity 1

  1. Read the Pocket Money persuasive letter.
  2. How many persuasive language features can you identify?
  3. Are you persuaded by the points that the author makes? Explain why.

Activity 2

  1. Identify your audience: teacher, parent, sibling, friend, principal etc.
  2. Select an area that you would like changed: uniform, homework, break times, bed time etc.
  3. Plan your persuasive letter using the planner.
  4. Include at least 3 persuasive language features.
persuasiveletter_camping.pdf

Activity 3

  1. Create a slogan / chant to support the change that you want to happen.
  2. Design a poster that communicates the change that you want to happen. Include your slogan on the poster.

Chants

Ain’t no power like the power of the people,

Cause the power of the people don’t stop! (Say what?)


Hey hey, ho ho!

__________* has got to go!



Week 4 Term 3

Using Metaphors

WALT use metaphors in our writing.

A metaphor says that one thing is something else. It is not literally true. It make a comparison between two things that are not alike.

Success Criteria

Compare two different things.

Use a metaphor to express an idea.

Understand that a metaphor is when you say that something is something else but that is not literally true.

Metaphors don't use 'as' or 'like'.

Dreams

Langston Hughes, 1902 - 1967

Hold fast to dreams 
For if dreams die
Life is a broken-winged bird
That cannot fly.

Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow.

Task One

What is the metaphor?

What does the poem mean about dreams?

Why did the poet use that metaphor?

Is it effective?

Task Two

Watch the videos and read the examples of metaphors below.

Task Three

Write 10 metaphors for plastic.

Examples of metaphors.

Kid-Friendly Metaphors

Check out these examples of metaphors. Look for the comparison being made:

  • The snow is a white blanket.
  • The hospital was a refrigerator.
  • The classroom was a zoo.
  • America is a melting pot.
  • Her lovely voice was music to his ears.
  • Life is a rollercoaster.
  • The alligator’s teeth are white daggers.
  • Their home was a prison.
  • The slide on the playground was a hot stove.
  • His heart is a cold iron.
  • She is a peacock.
  • He is a shining star.
  • Time is money.
  • My teacher is a dragon.
  • Tom’s eyes were icy.
  • The detective’s face was wooden as he listened to her story.
  • She feels that life is a fashion show.
  • The world is a stage.
  • My kid’s room is a disaster area.
  • The children were flowers grown in concrete gardens.
  • Kisses are the flowers of affection.
  • His words were cotton candy.
  • Mary’s eyes were fireflies.
  • John’s suggestion was just a Band-Aid.
  • The cast on his broken leg was a plaster shackle.
  • Her long hair was a flowing golden river.
  • The computers at school are old dinosaurs.
  • Laughter is the music of the soul.
  • He is a night owl.
  • Maria is a chicken.
  • The falling snowflakes are dancers.
  • At five o’clock, the interstate was a parking lot.
  • Books are keys to your imagination.
  • Her teddy bear was her best friend, never sharing her secrets.
  • The peaceful lake was a mirror.
  • Terry was blue when his goldfish died.
  • The wind was an angry witch.
  • The ballerina was a swan, gliding across the stage.
  • Her angry words were bullets to him.
  • Your brain is a computer.
  • Jamal was a pig at dinner.
  • You are my sunshine.
  • The car was a furnace in the sun.
  • Thank you so much. You are an angel.
  • That coach is an ogre.
  • Ben’s temper was a volcano, ready to explode.
  • The kids were monkeys on the jungle gym.
  • The sun is a golden ball.
  • The clouds are balls of cotton.
  • Sue’s room is a zoo with fish, a gerbil and a parakeet.
  • The park was a lake after the rain.
  • The lightning was fireworks in the sky.
  • Gary is a mule.
  • That lawn is a green carpet.
  • My dad is a road hog.
  • The stars are sparkling diamonds.
  • Those two best friends are two peas in a pod.
  • He is a walking dictionary.
  • Donations for the popular charity were a tsunami.
  • Necessity is the mother of invention.
  • My big brother is a couch potato.
  • The road was a ribbon stretching across the desert.
  • The teenager’s stomach was a bottomless pit.
  • The thunder was a mighty lion.
  • I am so excited. My pulse is a race car.
  • The moon is a white balloon.
  • Toddlers are rug rats.
  • The stormy ocean was a raging bull.
  • Her tears were a river flowing down her cheeks.

More Examples of Metaphors