Haiku 2, May 2008

WORLD HAIKU REVIEW Volume 6 Issue 3 - May 2008

(2) HAIKU SELECTIONS

SHINTAI HAIKU (NEW-STYLE HAIKU)

SHINTAI (NEW-STYLE)

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THE BEST TEN

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FIRST PLACE

about the war...

mother simply stares

into her soup

Irene Golas, Canada

SECOND PLACE

a bit of sand

in our interlocked hands

an hourglass

Vidur Jyoti, India

THIRD PLACE

weathered field—

slowly coming to terms

with my aborted child

Kala Ramesh, India

SEVEN HONOURABLE MENTIONS (In no particular order)

in the nook…only

the dust for an abandoned scale

to weigh

Dusan Mijajlovic Adski, Serbia

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An old drunkard

warms his shaking hands

over burnt-out candle.

Zoran Antonic, Veternik, Serbia

dusk

the brook becomes

its sound

Bill Kenney

in the mirror

I see myself as an old man

with a twinkle in his eyes

Howard Lee Kilby, Arkansas, USA

dusty road

a green toad flattened

into silence

Maya Lyubenova, Kotel, Bulgaria

Wasps buzz

in the heart of the lotus;

sting the usurpers.

Aju Mukhopadhyay, India

a beachside stroll

the breeze catching her hair

out of my reach

Jim Pollard, Kowloon, Hong Kong

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OTHER SHINTAI HAIKU OF MERIT (ZATSU-EI)

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crematorium

outside, kids chant

ring-a-rosy

John Bird, Australia

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dementia ward

all day mother tries all day

the doors to open doors

Irene Golas, Canada

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Hey three songs i wrote

One for you one for your ego

The third is missing

bistra ilin, Switzerland

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sand dunes

sleeping among mirages

i dream of oasis

Vidur Jyoti, India

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bird's morning call-

whistle from neighbour's cooker

dawn of another day

first rains-

tiptoes to me

the scent of earth

vishnu kapoor, India

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sparrow

on a branch

off again

letting the fish go . . .

the lake returns

to itself

Bill Kenney, Whitestone NY, USA

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she who gave me birth

insists I share her lunch

in the hospital

we talked of marriage

and even set a wedding date

then, nothing at all

Howard Lee Kilby, Hot Springs, Arkansas, USA

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calm evening

the voices of

birches and aspens

Anthony Anatoly Kudryavitsky, Ireland

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high tide

washes the chalk cliffs

an osprey's dive

Catherine J.S. Lee, Eastport, Maine, USA

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a hedgehog

looking my way

lost in grief

out of nowhere

a bee

hungry for summer

Aine macAodha, Ireland.

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outside the gardens

a struggling weed

with no community

Jonathan Machen, Colorado, USA

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some rain just got in my notebook

john martone

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married man

he even gorges

the mango seed

Tyrone McDonald, Brooklyn, NYC, USA

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winds change

drops now drumming

on the roof

Kitsune Miko

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Time has snipped

the thread between the reel and the kite;

boy days are over.

romping through the ripe

paddy field in dark night-

fox catching rats

Aju Mukhopadhyay, India

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shaving mirror

my bleary eyes stare

at a week old fuzz

dark clouds gather

a dhow heads for shore

bucking in the waves

Gautam Nadkarni, India

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temporarily

off-duty, the conductor

swaying to a jig

Maeve O’Sullivan

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the lid that made

the soup bowl special

breaks

ballet

counting the bones

in her back

Carol Pearce-Worthington, New York City, USA

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squeaky Chinese boats

lusty cries of the fisherwomen

shucking oysters

Jim Pollard, Kowloon, Hong Kong

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Empty for five days

the home has grown old

for a whole year

He is picking figs

A love offer from

a tree to a mouth.

The cricket

does not give a damn to my dream!

It cricks and cricks.

This tree too

I could have hugged

with a child's palm!

I'm frying a fish.

A cat is staring into my eyes,

like a mother-in-law.

after a night storm

all the firs and the big Cross

leaning to the South.

Aleksandar Prokopiev, Macedonia

(translated by: Irina Ivanovska and Fiona Sampson)

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from the seamless ocean

to the seamless sky

two copper birds rise

bats asleep sway on

the banyan ~ sound of

rustling leaves

labyrinths of light ~

an ant colony ascends

the ancient mountain

Narayanan Raghunathan, India

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garden project...

children sing

to the plants

long afternoon...

a sadhu asleep in

the banyan's shade

K. Ramesh, India

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First rain -

Unnoticed gargoyle

Surges to life

For every step of the Saptapadi*

A million others

Follow from past memories

*Saptapadi = Saptapadi or Saat phere is an important part of a Hindu marriage ceremony, and involves taking seven steps by the bride and the groom around a sacred fire

For a penny,

The poor boy sells

A balloon and his breath

Malini Rao, India

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Broken coconut shell

Full again

With fresh rain water

Parimala Rao, India

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Deadly Embrace

Sensing his own fate,

The bear relaxed his death grip -

As a shot rang out

Kristin A. Reynolds, VT, USA

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the nuts

are falling by themselves -

I'm roaming aimlessly

Dragan J. Ristic, Nis, Serbia

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moving out...

the shadows of nails

on the wall

Bruce Ross, USA

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night wind...

sounds of a bass

in the bamboo

shanna

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war protest –

the shadow of a hero’s horse

distorted on the groun

Nancy Stewart Smith, Georgia, USA

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From the garbage bin

A beggar is taking bread

And the boy a broken toy

Svetlana Stankoviæ

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bright morning

old man's memories

lost in sepia

Andre Surridge, Hamilton, NEW ZEALAND

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she wears

the perfume he hates

love stinks

Bette Norcross Wappner, Erlanger, KY, USA

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desert flowers

a tortoise feasts on

her favorite weed

senior trip

grandma blushes as the

zoo animal mate

Carmel Westerman, Yuma, Arizona, USA

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