English Bible Versions
Revelation 21:1-4
King James Version
First published: 1611
Translation made by a committee of 50 English scholars and translators under the authorization of King James I of England.
21 And I saw a new heaven and a new earth: for the first heaven and the first earth were passed away; and there was no more sea.
2 And I John saw the holy city, new Jerusalem, coming down from God out of heaven, prepared as a bride adorned for her husband.
3 And I heard a great voice out of heaven saying, Behold, the tabernacle of God is with men, and he will dwell with them, and they shall be his people, and God himself shall be with them, and be their God.
4 And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away.
New International Version
First published: 1978
Translation made by an international committee of more than 100 evangelical biblical scholars.
21 Then I saw “a new heaven and a new earth,” for the first heaven and the first earth had passed away, and there was no longer any sea.
2 I saw the Holy City, the new Jerusalem, coming down out of heaven from God, prepared as a bride beautifully dressed for her husband.
3 And I heard a loud voice from the throne saying, “Look! God’s dwelling place is now among the people, and he will dwell with them. They will be his people, and God himself will be with them and be their God.
4 ‘He will wipe every tear from their eyes. There will be no more death’ or mourning or crying or pain, for the old order of things has passed away.”
COMMENTS
VERSE 1: The difference is subtle, but the overall meaning stays the same.
Technique: Possibly Explicitation.
VERSE 2: A concise term versus a more explicit term with more imagery.
Technique: Possibly Expansion / Register Change.
VERSE 3: The use of biblibal sense against a contemporary explanation.
Technique: Possibly Explicitation / Register Change.
VERSE 4: One is more clear in stating that a previous state/order has come to an end.
Technique: Possibly Explicitation / Expansion.
The differences between the KJV and NIV show that translating biblical texts entails more than just replacing words from one language for another. The main idea of Revelation 21:1-4 is preserved in both translations, although the KJV's archaic register, explicitness, vocabulary choices, and grammatical structures are often modified in the NIV to make the text more understandable to modern readers.
Spanish Bible Versions
Apocalipsis 21:1-4
Reina-Valera 1960
Published: 1960
Published by Sociedades Bíblicas Unidas / Sociedades Bíblicas en América Latina.
21 Vi un cielo nuevo y una tierra nueva; porque el primer cielo y la primera tierra pasaron, y el mar ya no existía más.
2 Y yo Juan vi la santa ciudad, la nueva Jerusalén, descender del cielo, de Dios, dispuesta como una esposa ataviada para su marido.
3 Y oí una gran voz del cielo que decía: He aquí el tabernáculo de Dios con los hombres, y él morará con ellos; y ellos serán su pueblo, y Dios mismo estará con ellos como su Dios.
4 Enjugará Dios toda lágrima de los ojos de ellos; y ya no habrá muerte, ni habrá más llanto, ni clamor, ni dolor; porque las primeras cosas pasaron.
Nueva Versión Internacional
First published: 1999
Published by Biblica, Inc.
21 Después vi un cielo nuevo y una tierra nueva, porque el primer cielo y la primera tierra habían dejado de existir, lo mismo que el mar.
2 Vi además la ciudad santa, la nueva Jerusalén, que bajaba del cielo, procedente de Dios, preparada como una novia hermosamente vestida para su prometido.
3 Oí una potente voz que provenía del trono y decía: «¡Aquí, entre los seres humanos, está el santuario de Dios! Él habitará en medio de ellos y ellos serán su pueblo; Dios mismo estará con ellos y será su Dios.
4 Él enjugará toda lágrima de los ojos. Ya no habrá muerte ni llanto, tampoco lamento ni dolor, porque las primeras cosas han dejado de existir».
COMMENTS
VERSE 1: A brief expression against a more explicit statement.
Technique: Possibly Explicitation / Expansion
VERSE 2: A formal point of view shifted into contemporary style.
Technique: Possibly Expansion / Register Change / Semantic modulation
VERSE 3: The use of biblibal sense against a contemporary explanation.
Technique: Possibly Explicitation / Register Change / Semantic modulation
VERSE 4: Same as Verse 1 about a brief expression becoming more direct and explicit.
Technique: Possibly Explicitation / Expansion
The variations between the NIV and the Reina-Valera 1960 demonstrate how translators can modify a biblical passage's vocabulary, register, and degree of explicitness while maintaining the passage's main idea. While the NVI employs more modern and descriptive language to make the meaning more understandable to modern readers, the Reina-Valera 1960 typically maintains a more traditional and formal biblical style.