Nicholas: What has been done well?
The atmos and music were well synced in the edit.
I like the music dropping in to add dramatic tension.
Nicholas: What could be improved on?
The dialogue at the start was low.
Accidentally, their was audio from the crew; calling cut and action.
My response: How do you plan to improve your edit?
I will make the appropriate changes to the dialogue at the start, by balancing it.
I will remove the crew audio by cutting in time.
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