WWW: I was able to produce a good replication of Edgar Wrights fast cuts and whip pans.
EBI: I'd completely re-do the task using a different scenario and develop a storyboard to produce a clearer replication of Edgar Wright's work.
WWW: I made a storyboard and shot list in order to be more prepared for the filming. I had actors in place too. Overall, an appropriate amount of planning was put in place to create a better final product.
EBI: I'd like to add effects to the flashback to make it more obvious rather than adding a time card, also I'd like to add a zoom effect to the text message for emphasis.