What is the cause and effect idea put forth in the thesis?
How does the thesis reveal the essay’s pattern of organization?
What are the things in parentheses all about?
How are transitions being made from paragraph to paragraph?
Which second body paragraph makes more sense here?
Intro Ideas: Friar Lawrence is a spiritual guide to Romeo. He is also worried about the ongoing conflicts in Verona.
Thesis: Although Friar Lawrence hopes to unite the feuding Capulets and Montagues, his reckless actions cause the untimely deaths of the young lovers.
I. The Friar criticizes Romeo for falling in love with Juliet, yet he foolishly believes a secret marriage may end the feud. (secrecy)
II. Despite warning Romeo to be cautious, he fails to see the risk of his own plan. (underestimates risks)
II. Despite warning Romeo and Juliet to be cautious, he does not understand that Romeo has already angered Tybalt. (underestimates risks)
III. His haste and shortsighted optimism lead to death. (compounds bad decisions by being reckless)