Chicago Notes/Bibliography - Equity

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Jay Caspian Kang, an education reporter for the New York Times reported that, "starting with the class of 2030, will require every public and charter high school student in the state to take an ethnic studies course before graduation.”¹ Equity in America has been a goal, but thus far it has been a work in progress and society is far from achieving its goal.²Joe Hernandew, who is the …., reported for NPR that, “There were 7,759 reported hate crimes in the U.S. last year — the most in 12 years, the FBI reported this week.”³ Hence Governor Newsom of California signed into law a new high school requirement.⁴ Continuing Besosa and Maisto’s previous argument, most faculty members at most colleges are part-time teachers.⁵

The issue of equity as it affects education is complicated.⁶ Many factors need to be considered.

Hate crimes have always plagued America. However, hate crimes are becoming more visible as society begins to take more notice.⁷

Endnotes

Jay Caspian Kang, “How Should We Teach Students About Inequality?,”

New York Times, October 21, 2021, https://www.nytimes.com/2021/10/21/opinion/ethnic-studies-california.html

Angel Blah, “Whatever Whatever,” Los Angeles Times, October 25, 2021, B4.
Joe Hernandez, “Hate Crimes Reach The Highest Level In More Than A Decade,”

NPR, September 20, 2021, URL Link

Kang, “How Should We Teach.”
Mayra Besosa and Maria Maisto, “Defining the ‘Faculty’ and Getting It Right,” in

Contemporary Colleges and Universities: A Reader, ed. By Joseph L. DeVitis (New York: Peter Lang, 2013), 151.

In education Equity includes not only race, but it also emcompasses gender

identification, age, sexual orientation, political affiliation, and language. For more information see Dan Levin, “A Racial Slur, a Viral Video, and a Reckoning,” New York Times, December 26, 2020, https://www.nytimes.com/2020/12/26/us/mimi-groves-jimmy-galligan-racial-slurs.html

Hate crimes have become more visible to America during the pandemic. The table

produced by the FBI depicts rising crimes against all races, religions, sexual orientations, disabilities, genders, and gender identities. These categories were determined by the Department of Justice and available at FBI, “2020 Hate Crime Statistics,” US Department of Justice, 2020, URL Link

Besosa and Maitso, “Defining the ‘Faculty,’” 153.
Besosa and Maitso, “Defining the ‘Faculty,’” 155.
Hernandez, “Hate Crimes.”
Hernandez, “Hate Crimes.”
FBI, “2020 Hate Crimes.”

Bibliography

Besosa, Mayra and Maria Maisto. “Defining the ‘Faculty’ and Getting It Right.” In

Contemporary Colleges and Universities: A Reader, edited by Joseph L. DeVitis.

150-172, New York: Peter Lang, 2013.

Blah, Angel. “Whatever Whatever.” Los Angeles Times, October 25, 2021, B4.

FBI. “2020 Hate Crime Statistics.” US Department of Justice, 2020. URL Link .

Hernandez,Joe. “Hate Crimes Reach The Highest Level In More Than A Decade.”

NPR, September 20, 2021. URL Link

Kang, Jay Caspian. “How Should We Teach Students About Inequality?” New York Times,

October 21, 2021,

https://www.nytimes.com/2021/10/21/opinion/ethnic-studies-california.html

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Yes - at least 11 notes are used.

Superscripts used consecutively and effectively, Superscript Punctuation error - Periods go inside the quotation mark." Superscript goes outside of the quotation mark.

A minimum of sources were used in the paper.

YOu did NOT introduce a good foil (counterargument) and did NOT argue against it well.

minimal or no writing errors, Containers/publishers like the Washington Post or Los Angeles Times should be italicized in both the text of your essay and in the bibliographic entries

Some authors/sources were properly introduced. Some were not.

You did NOT evalute your sources well., YOu did NOT compare your sources to one another.

The intro was effective by introducing the topic and the author's perspecitve.

Introduction needs development.

Shortened Note not used for note(s) subsequent to the first use = ERROR, Italics error for containers., Missing author, Chicago Notes/Bibliography format errors, #6 and #7 have authors. You need to find the names of the reporters.

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Draft 2 -

Draft 2 - Equity

Jay Caspian Kang, an education reporter for the New York Times reported that, "starting with the class of 2030, will require every public and charter high school student in the state to take an ethnic studies course before graduation.”¹ Equity in America has been a goal, but thus far it has been a work in progress and society is far from achieving its goal.²Joe Hernandew, who is the …., reported for NPR that, “There were 7,759 reported hate crimes in the U.S. last year — the most in 12 years, the FBI reported this week.”³ Hence Governor Newsom of California signed into law a new high school requirement.⁴ Continuing Besosa and Maisto’s previous argument, most faculty members at most colleges are part-time teachers.⁵

The issue of equity as it affects education is complicated.⁶ Many factors need to be considered.

Hate crimes have always plagued America. However, hate crimes are becoming more visible as society begins to take more notice.⁷