3 Things I Would Change About Shaw

Introduction

    Hello, my name is...

I am going to tell you about three things I would change about Shaw High School.

The first thing I would change is...

The second thing I would change is...

The third thing I would change is...

Body 1

    The first thing I would change is...

The reason I would change this is...

The worst thing about the way it is now is...

School would be better because...

I would describe this change as...

Body 2

    The second thing I would change is...

The reason I would change this is...

The worst thing about the way it is now is...

School would be better because...

I would describe this change as...

Body 3

    The third thing I would change is...

The reason I would change this is...

The worst thing about the way it is now is...

School would be better because...

I would describe this change as...

Conclusion

    I have told you about the changes I would make at Shaw High School.

The first change I would make is...

The second change I would make is...

The third change I would make is...

These changes would make Shaw...