This page has resources and information for the writing work we do in this course.
Journal Writing is often the first step in the writing process. It is where you have complete freedom to explore thoughts and ideas and experiment with language. In this course, we will have time set aside for journal writing during class each week, but I encourage you to write in your journal daily. I encourage you to keep a physical notebook that you can write in, and you are also welcome to do your journal writing digitally in a Google Doc, notes app, or other application that you prefer.
Brainstorming and prewriting activities may also include reading looking at artwork, taking a walk, listening to music, participating in other activities, or even meditating. If you develop the habit of being mindful (observant and thoughtful), almost any experience can help you generate ideas that you may want to explore in your writing, and your experiences and journal writing can help you make connections that can lead to innovative ideas and solutions in your writing.
"Journal Writing as a Teaching Technique to Promote Reflection" by Stacy E. Walker | annotated copy
Reflection involves thinking about and exploring an issue of concern, which is triggered by an experience. Reflection distinguishes experts from those with basic competency because an expert "uses information from previous experiences as well as the insights gained from the reflective process to improve decision-making ability."
competency vs. expertise
Competency = knowing-in-action or the "know-how" an individual reveals while performing an action.
When a familiar routine produces an unexpected result, it is beneficial for students to reflect on it afterward; this helps the individual to gain insight, deepen understanding, and develop competency in the nuances and complexities of a skill.
Expertise = able to engage in reflection-in-action in which an individual "reshapes what he or she is doing while doing it" based on data and insights including those gained from reflection on past experiences. Expertise and insight comes from reflecting on a experience after it has happened.
Journal writing can be an excellent strategy for facilitating reflection and growth. Journal writing assignments give students guided opportunities to "think aloud" on paper and reflect their own perceptions or understandings of content and situations. Journal writing can be designed to enhance reflection, facilitate critical thought, express feelings in writing about problems encountered during experiences, and practice writing summaries, goals, and focused arguments.
Journal writing also helps students move from being passive to active learners, and aids in "placing responsibility with the student for active engagement and self-directed learning."
Tips for reflective journal writing:
the assignment should guide the written content; example assignments:
Write about at least one reading, video, concept, issue, event or person we have explored in class or in your independent research.
Choose one of the following topics to focus on in your reflection writing.
Reflect on your research project and/or writing this week.
[Specific question(s) related to topics.]
challenge students to reflect on information and situations, as well as consider how they might perform differently should similar situations arise in the future
encourage students to reflect on an experience, whether that experience is from classroom content or their own experiences
What did you like/enjoy?
What did you find interesting?
What did you struggle with? What did you find challenging?
What did you learn?
What questions do you have?
What relevant information or resources can you find?
encourage students to include new information, resources and ideas in their journal writing, especially information that is relevant to a problem/challenge that they have identified in their previous writing, or information that interests them and provides new avenues for professional growth and development
reflective journal writing can also involve writing about difficult concepts, summarizing a discussion, or exploring or arguing for/against a particular issue
encourage students to explore different perspectives in their writing
consider assigning a mix of preassigned and spontaneous topics
preassigned: advantage is that students can think about the topic before writing
spontaneous: advantage is that students can write about any topic or experience that concerns or interests them
allow time for journal writing during class (10-15 minutes)
allow students to write in a freeform style -- the journal should be a safe space for free expression -- maintaining confidentiality and having a nonjudgmental approach is key
summaries or critiques should be 1-2 pages -- content is more important than word count
be clear about grading:
How will journals be graded?
What percentage of the grade will be affected by their journal writing? (10-20% of the overall course grade)
How/when are journals turned in? How/when will they be returned?
Giving feedback on journal writing:
if/when students submit portions of their reflective journal writing, consider giving written feedback or having an individual dialogue/debriefing session -- opportunity for validation and further input
the focus should be on the students' thought process and the content of their writing, not on grammar, punctuation or spelling
after the first journal writing assignment, provide timely feedback to every student -- 1-2 comments about the overall journal or comments/questions related specific portions
in feedback or conversations, encourage students to reflect more deeply... guide them to continuously ask themselves why they feel the way they do about a topic or situation or why they made a certain decision -->
Why did I...?
How will... affect...?
What changes could be made now or in similar situations in the future?
individual conferences and/or group discussions can help with connecting the journal writing with critical thinking
group discussions can promote the exchange of ideas and help students synthesize information
3 stages of the reflective process (can be used for assessing the level of reflectivity):
awareness of uncomfortable feelings (frustration, stress, etc.)
critical analysis of the situation -- involves feelings and new knowledge is applied
development of a new perspective on the situation
Visit the Using Mentor Texts page for more information about using mentor texts in creative writing.
Mentor texts are pieces of literature that you can return to and reread for many different purposes. They are texts to be studied and imitated … Mentor texts help writers to take risks and be different writers tomorrow than they are today. It helps them to try out new strategies and formats.
--”Reading, Writing, and Mentor Texts: Imagining Possibilities” from National Writing Project
New Ways to Workshop: A Reading List to Inspire Literary Innovation by Rachel May and Krys Malcolm Belc - discusses the idea of using a chapbook concept to commit to writing poems around a single topic, idea, question, or theme, for the entire semester. Also includes a list of chapbooks that can be used as mentor texts for such an exploration.
The Writing Workshop and Its Variations from the Princeton Writing Program
Peter Elbow describes an alternative approach to the writing process that involves extensive freewriting and two special drafting stages that he refers to as "growing" and "cooking." He also discusses his approach to editing and the his suggestions for peer feedback in the "believing game" versus the "doubting game."
Brainstorming/Prewriting - journal writing
Drafting - creative writing or analysis writing
Madman, Architect, Carpenter, Judge: Roles and the Writing Process, by Betty S. Flowers - uses a wonderful analogies to explain the writing process and how to deal with writing when you feel stuck
The Creative Writing Prompts page includes writing prompts, workshop lessons, and writing exercises.
by Richard Marius
In this essay, Marius explains when, how and why to write multiple drafts of a piece. Writing multiple drafts involves a combination of drafting and revision -- revising your ideas and the way you are presenting them as you re-write your piece.
If you feel stuck during drafting, an audio writing reflection can help you identify what is going well and what you are struggling with. This can be an important step in looking at your work from different perspectives, and it can make it easier for others to give you helpful feedback.
Use the following four prompts to help you with what to say:
Describe what you’re working on.
Describe what you’re doing well or what improvement you’ve made.
Describe what you’re struggling with in your writing or what you need to improve.
Describe your upcoming goals.
This page has information and resources to help with writing college application essays.
Writing Workshop Warm-Up: Choose Your Writing Focus for Today
Brainstorming: please share your Google Doc to me
Drafting: think about details you are adding and how you are building suspense or making your reader want to know more
Sharing: match with partners; share your Google Doc and read aloud to one another; feedback questions – What did you like about the piece? (Be specific and refer to specific details) What was your favorite sentence? Why? What confused you?
Revising: think about what details you want to add to help build suspense; use thesaurus to help with word choice
Editing: how to use the red line & blue line in Google Doc; share your piece with a partner; peer editing – capitalization, punctuation, spelling & grammar
Publishing: direct students to the publishing & contests page; look at 1-2 magazines/contests together
After completing your journal writing, please do one of the following:
Review the feedback you received on your writing on the discussion board, and continue to work on drafting and/or revising your piece.
Explore options and opportunities for publishing your written work on our publications & contests page.
Read your book.
Work on the writing piece that you have been working on in your Google Doc.