--> At this point you have written an introductory paragraph, where you found your most exciting part of your hike and used that experience to pull your reader into the story
--> Now you are going to bring your reader back to the beginning, explain how the day began and when you arrive at your most exciting part of the story, you remind your reader of it (since they already read about it), and continue the story from that point on.
--> In all your story should be about a page and a half to two pages long.
--> Here is how the story will be score:
Proficient: I start with the most interesting part of the hike and I transition my reader so they know the sequence. I check my spelling, grammar, and punctuation to support clarity. I have an interesting title, a by line and my name on my story. My story uses sensory description/imagery to recreate the experience for my reader. My story has a beginning, middle and end.
Jill says: "I'm looking at doing a book sale for middle school students, but I'm trying to garner interest before going through it in case there isn't enough interest. I'm looking to see if students might be interested in the new book by Terry Lynne Johnson, called Dog Driven. Anyone who purchases a copy will be entered into a drawing to win a gift box including a signed copy of the book Ice Dogs a wooden wolf ornament, a sticker, and a pen. Can you ask your students to see if they might be interested? Thanks! "
“I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived. I did not wish to live what was not life, living is so dear; nor did I wish to practise resignation, unless it was quite necessary. I wanted to live deep and suck out all the marrow of life, to live so sturdily and Spartan-like as to put to rout all that was not life, to cut a broad swath and shave close, to drive life into a corner, and reduce it to its lowest terms...”
--> At this point you have written an introductory paragraph, where you found your most exciting part of your hike and used that experience to pull your reader into the story
--> Now you are going to bring your reader back to the beginning, explain how the day began and when you arrive at your most exciting part of the story, you remind your reader of it (since they already read about it), and continue the story from that point on.
--> In all your story should be about a page and a half to two pages long.
--> Here is how the story will be score:
Proficient: I start with the most interesting part of the hike and I transition my reader so they know the sequence. I check my spelling, grammar, and punctuation to support clarity. I have an interesting title, a by line and my name on my story. My story uses sensory description/imagery to recreate the experience for my reader. My story has a beginning, middle and end.
*If you have no comments from me on your documents, it means you haven't saved them in your LA folder and I can't see them to give you credit for doing them...
--> Be sure to write an interesting title, add a by line and your name (interesting titles do not include Donn's Decisions Essay, but rather something like "To Follow the Stream or Not to Follow the Stream, That is the Question Donn Fendler Must Answer While Lost on Mount Katahdin" get creative, it should lead your reader into what your essay is about.
--> At this point you have written an introductory paragraph, where you found your most exciting part of your hike and used that experience to pull your reader into the story
--> Now you are going to bring your reader back to the beginning, explain how the day began and when you arrive at your most exciting part of the story, you remind your reader of it (since they already read about it), and continue the story from that point on.
--> In all your story should be about a page and a half to two pages long.
--> Here is an example
Beginning: I write 3 body paragraphs
Developing: I write an introductory paragraph, 3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion paragraph
Proficient: I write an introductory hamburger paragraph, I write 3 body hamburger paragraphs, I write a conclusion hamburger paragraph
Expanding: All under proficient and I write more than 3 body paragraphs or my 3 body paragraphs have multiple parts to thoroughly explain how the decisions Donn was making were foolish or smart
John Muir (/mjʊər/ MEWR; April 21, 1838 – December 24, 1914)[1] also known as "John of the Mountains" and "Father of the National Parks",[2][3] was an influential Scottish-American[4][5]:42 naturalist, author, environmental philosopher, glaciologist, and early advocate for the preservation of wilderness in the United States of America.
His letters, essays, and books describing his adventures in nature, especially in the Sierra Nevada, have been read by millions. His activism has helped to preserve the Yosemite Valley, Sequoia National Park and many other wilderness areas.
Similarly, no one ever steps into the same woods twice, for it's not the same woods and you are not the same person.
Nature writing is nonfiction or fiction prose or poetry about the natural environment. Nature writing encompasses a wide variety of works, ranging from those that place primary emphasis on natural history facts (such as field guides) to those in which philosophical interpretation predominate. It includes natural history essays, poetry, essays of solitude or escape, as well as travel and adventure writing.[1]
Nature writing often draws heavily on scientific information and facts about the natural world; at the same time, it is frequently written in the first person and incorporates personal observations of and philosophical reflections upon nature.
Students in LA!
and Twitter! https://twitter.com/you_woods
Warm up: Memories of the hike...
Your story will have two audiences!
Students in LA!
and Twitter! https://twitter.com/you_woods
Warm up: Think back to when we discussed scenes we wanted to see in the movie version
"There were funny sounds, though, the those woods--things walking, something big and heavy--and something drinking and the funniest noise I ever heard, a high, quavering screech that made your blood cold. I guess it was a bird, for pretty soon the noise came from another spot. There were other noises, too--like trees and branches breaking and crashing down."
--> Footnote: Probably a screech owl--maker of one of the most eerie sounds to be heard in the woods at night. It is remarkable that Donn does not, in his narrative, make greater reference to night sounds. The probable explanation is that he was so exhausted each night and slept so profoundly that he heard little. If this explanation is correct, he was protected from a hundred terrors. Wilderness woods are filled with night noises that are terrifying to the inexperienced (68)
What can you imagine Donn's description of the night noises to be? Place yourself in his shoes as you listen to a screech owl and other night noises. Describe what you hear in particular, notice that this sense is heightened because you can't see in the dark. How do you feel?
Warmup: Here are some teasers for what looks like a GREAT movie, but, it is not yet released and may never be fully made. Why should it be made and what are the scenes you most want to see?
Clearing. Imagine you are the eyes behind this photograph by YWP's Selena Bulan. Have you just stumbled across a way out of the forest, with intense relief – or have you just ventured in? Tell the story.
Step. It has been said that, "The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." Think of something big you would like to accomplish, and write about the first step.
Done with all of that stuff? Type up your YWP writing in the body of an email that you compose to mbove@u32.org, she will send it along to YWP and it might appear in the NEWSPAPER!!!!
5. Did you know there is a graphic novel version of LMM?!
Collaborative learning noticing imagery! Before we get into it, let's remember our tenets:
We want to be respectful and responsible: I work to impress upon others that they can count on me to follow-through and listen.
We want to contribute, cooperate & communicate clearly: I work to participate in learning and engage with others.
We want to be open-minded and kind: I work to consider new ideas and try. I work to build friendships.
We want to help others and have empathy: I work to include others and support them in their learning.
We want to work hard and be prepared: I work to be ready and willing to learn. I work to put forth my best efforts.
I'm asking you do all of these things when you collaborate and that's a lot! Good teamwork looks like: listening to each other, everyone having a voice and taking responsibility to look for imagery in the book, coming with your book and sharing your book with others if they forget theirs, sharing responsibility of taking notes on the notes sheet, and complimenting others on their hard work.
Newspaper
Field Trip
Sharing? Claim that poem!
Imagery!
Donn's Decisions
Field Trip
Vocabulary for chapters 5 and 6-- BE SURE TO HAVE THIS READ FOR Tuesday
Blow-downs
Rheumatism
Kewpie
Go to your U32 bookmarks, find star 360, click on it
Your login is your email: mbove24 and your pass is your lunch number (I can find it if you don't know it)
Choose Hollis or Mary and choose the reading assessment
monitor pass is: admin
please open this document, go to file, make a copy, and save the poem to your LA folder in google drive
please open this document, go to file, make a copy, and save the poem to your LA folder in google drive
Here is an example:
I AM
I am a hilarious girl, as carefree as a Saturday afternoon.
I wonder if the sun ever sets in the middle of the day anywhere on earth.
I hear the stomping of a hundred mustangs on the desert in Arabia.
I see a horse with golden wings soaring into the sunset.
I want to ride swiftly over a green meadow.
I am a hilarious girl, as carefree as a saturday afternoon.
I pretend to be an olympic runner.
I feel the sky pressing down on me as I jump in the air.
I touch the clouds when there is mist and fog in the air.
I worry that I’ll fall down and won’t know how to get back up.
I grieve when love leaves.
I am a hilarious girl, as carefree as a Saturday afternoon.
I understand that I will not be here someday.
I say, let us all be free.
I dream about the day when I will have my own house.
I try to be the best person I can be.
I hope to lay in the sun as many days as I can.
I am a hilarious girl, as carefree as a Saturday afternoon.
How do you write for 7 minutes?
--Let go of your judge, it doesn’t have to be ‘good’, it doesn’t have to follow grammar or spelling rules, it doesn’t have to look perfect on the page. Writers write a lot and a lot of what they write is fodder-- it’s just stuff in their heads that they get on the page to use bits and pieces of later for pieces they polish up. The goal of the writer’s journal is just to have a lot of writing in it… a lot! Quality doesn’t matter at all, it’s all about quantity!
--Don’t like the prompt? Skip it and write whatever you want!
--Here’s a trick-- keep your pen/pencil on the page. Keep it moving.
--You can always write stream of consciousness, literally whatever is in your head!