Week 1 Polished Piece

Grandpa 

One hot day, I had just been picked up from school. I was in my dad's car with my brother, after driving for 3 minutes my dad told us the news. Our Grandpa died of pneumonia. My mom had been there when he died. “Don’t worry about it, my dad said.”

When it was time to go, we all gathered at the funeral and sat down. Then a bunch of stories were told. After we walked outside to bury him. And we all threw flowers in.

Finally everyone was sobbing, there were a few more speeches and then we all left. After we left we went to our Grandma's house, had food and then we all went to our house, and my mom gave me and my brother stuffed animals “thank you.” We both said, and we went to bed.

Week 1 Golden Lines

Day 1

We kept arguing, but then my Dad came ,yelled at my brother and then they both left.

Day 2

and we all threw flowers in.

Day 3

We had been together for 5 years and we slowly became best friends.

Day 4

For breakfast I would have a biscuit cut in half filled with cinnamon and sugar with a side of bacon.

Day 5

screens can change you mentally and physically.

Week 2 Golden Lines

Day 6

It’s the size of a teacup dog

Day 7

A teacup dog, it was a cream colored maltipoo. I named her Lulu.

Day 8

because it calms my stomach 

Day 9

My brother Riley and me are on a competition for our exercise goal on our Apple Watches.

Day 10

“Goodnight” I said “good night” he replied.

Week 2 Polished Piece

Stranger danger 

One day on my 11th birthday I got a superpower! It was invisibility.

I started off by pranking my family with it like scaring them. “Boo!”

I yelled. But eventually I started having a normal everyday life.

Me and my brother Riley, were on a walk in our neighborhood when suddenly out of nowhere came a kidnapper! We ran as fast as we could. “What if he takes us,” I whispered. “I don’t know,” said Riley. I then turned invisible and beat up the kidnapper. Then we went to the police to report him.

When we got home we told our parents and they sorted everything out. My brother and I, washed up and then went to bed. “Good night,” I said. “Good night,” he replied.