Week 1 Polished Piece

The Lost Panda

“Grr. Grr.” Baby panda gets angry because she needed to say hi to her friend but she couldn’t so she runs away from mama panda “Stomp.”Stomp.”Baby panda sprints so far that she gets lost and can’t see anything but bamboo. (Dun Dun Dunnn!)

Next, the baby panda tries to walk home but she just gets more lost. So she gives up and eats a lot of crunchy bamboo.Then, when the baby panda gets full. The baby panda takes a  nap so she would be able to get back home after. 

Finally, she opens her eyes a little bit and realizes that she is in a different place but she kinda recognizes the place but she still doesn’t know where she is. So she wakes up and realizes she got found by Mama panda.She thanked Mama panda for finding her. From then on she never ran away from anyone anymore.

                                             The End!

Week 1 Golden Lines

Day 1

I told them that the California State law said if you are over the age of 8 you could sit in the front.

Day 2

I love writing stories.

Day 3

I got the baby dinosaur right before the meteor hit.

Day 4

We believe that math is the best school subject.

Day 5

It helps the world be a better place.

Week 2 Golden Lines

Day 6

It was a tiny owl but, not just an ordinary owl it is a magical white owl.

Day 7

When I looked back my house was gone!

Day 8

You learn a lot of things with nonfiction books.

Day 9

When your an astronaut you can experience floating in the air.

Day 10

Because it is so cheap compared to the U.S.

Week 2 Polished Piece

😎 My awesome superpower 😎

First on my 11th birthday  I went to school . But it seemed like nobody saw me. “Hi,” I told my friends.”Where are you?”  My friends wondered .”In front of you.Am I invisible?”I replied.”Yes,”they replied.

 Next,I tell my friends in class “Can you see me?” “No,”they explained.Then, in class I realized that I could be invisible. I told everyone I knew at break time that I could go invisible. I was thinking at the last hour of class who gave this to me and why they gave this to me and before I knew it school was over.

Finally, I started walking home. But when I was walking home I saw three different shadows. So I turned  around and saw three people with knives and then I sprinted as fast as I could .I ran past the beautiful beach and then the bakery and then the park and even  the bridge . and they were still following me.I turned through every block but they were still following me. But then I remembered that I had invisibility powers. So I went invisible and escaped. “Hooray” I yelled. And then I had a party 🎉 .

                                                  THE END!