Week 1 Polished Piece

Blank War

Bzzzzzzz beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep A paper was made in the factory.It was brand new and about to go in the case . Next,2  small people took the paper out .1  yelled. I got it first ! The other 1 yelled no I got it! So they started fighting with red and blue paint  but little did they know, they were making a abstract piece of art,!1 of the workers said I can sell this for a 100,0000 dollars and finally they did but it was fake money, he got furious so he punched the building and it collapsed so he killed him but it turned out that he was his father so he felt really sorry and he went to jail but little did you know he was a evil maniac and he felt like a cactus so no one will try to get him and also he was also camouflaged so he escaped out of jail and he jumped in to his car. The two guys stopped fighting and actually they were karate masters so they looked for the man and got revenge. He got blasted out of earth and landed in mars and lived there for the rest of his life.

Week 1 Golden Lines

Day 1

It might feel like you’re stuck wearing it for 6 years.

Day 2

He got  blasted out of earth and landed  in mars and he lived there for the rest of his life.

Day 3

It looked like a mini Godzilla.

Day 4

I would go nowhere but my bed.

Day 5

This shows that the chicken gave birth to the egg.

Week 2 Golden Lines

Day 6

I think it was from Harry Potter.

Day 7

It felt good to win.

Day 8

As the journey continues.

Day 9

I would be a astronaut.

Day 10 

I can not sleep.

Week 2 Polished Piece

The r.o.c.k.☠️

Chomp! Chomp!  I am in  2 grade,I just got my school lunch!1 minute later…I finished!Some people call me a big eater.12 years later…now I’m in college!I see the 🪨 and I want to  say 🤲 but I actually ate him!1 year later…hi guys. I just discovered I have a new superpower 🦸‍♀️, I can turn into the rock 🪨! 

 Right now I’m watching my nephew Ginny. Oh I forgot to mention that my name is jack I am going to a wrestling 🤼‍♀️ match “ Jack exclaimed can I come replied Ginny exited”of course  replied jack and then they drove to the wrestling match 🤼 exited 1 hour later…I 🏆 😁! But suddenly the big boss arrived and I tried to defeat him but let's just say it did not go well. Bang!Flip! 😓! 

I broke my back and now I have to hug Ginny because that will make me feel better ❤️‍🩹 then the big boss barged into my house 🏠 so I turned into the rock 🪨 and beaten him up and we 👎 had trouble 👿 ever again but expect for  my back trouble from wrestling 🤼‍♀️. Finally, they never got bothered by anyone and plus they got rich 🤑 lived happy 😃 for the rest of their life and they lived in a mansion.

12 months…Now Ginny is going to her new school 🏫and its a private school so she can learn better and she told her friends that her dad is the rock 🪨 and her friends eyes 👀 lit up with joy so when  Ginny  got out of school the whole school asked “ can I get your autograph and Ginny became the school  queen 👸 and that is the story behind the rock 🪨.

Dream Job 

I would be a astronaut 🧑‍🚀so I can explore and make friends like aliens 👽 It would 👃 like a unusual smell but I would not mind.Also I would see something weird . I would see the beautiful view of the galaxy 🌌.