Week 1 Polished Piece

Inside the Egg

The axolotl team of 25 swam down into the dark underwater cave there was a round thing “look at that thing” said the axolotl captain named Jonny there was no response Jonny looked back saw that no axolotl was there Jonny slowly turned and saw two glowing red eyes. Jonny got the thing and swam as fast as an axolotl could but it was too slow at the exit the eyes were right behind Jonny. Jonny turned and grabbed Jonny’s pistol from it’s hustler and shot there was a roaring then a scream and Jonny’s dead body.1 year later a young axolotl named Jo playing with a dog named Bob The Dog or just Bob “catch Jo said to Bob then he throw a ball then tripped on something round and it cracked and a small dragon popped out then red eyes appeared and a evil axolotl named Josh swam out of the dark his eyes flickering then the dragon’s eyes turned black. “Finally” said Josh “the egg hatch” Josh feed the dragon a thing that smelled like trash and the dragon barfed it up and said it tasted so bad fine eat him. he pointed at Jo. Jo felt a sharp pain though his right leg before the dragon ripped it off Bob punched Josh and the dragons eyes turned back to normal and the dragon left 3 years later Jo’s leg regained because that’s what axolotls do 

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Week 1 Golden Lines

Day 1

I won the argument by ask again and again.

Day 2

There was a gunshot then a roar then a scream

Day 3

Finally a axolotl fell from the sky and the dinosaur ran off a cliff into a zoo.

Day 4

I wake up in my bed with my axolotl plush.

Day 5

Axolotls can breathe in and out of water 💧 

Week 2 Golden Lines

Day 6

captain cuttlefish and his crew are hunting 🐠🐟🐡

Day 7

all of this shows that Minecraft is better than Roblox 😊👍

Day 8

and this🐲🪽🗡️

Day 9

that is why I would rather be an astronaut 👨‍🚀

Day 10

and there are lots of different types

Week 2 Polished Piece

dog vs cat 

Part 1 the talking dog 🐶 

I was at my house eating some pizza and then my dog Lulu, a chihuahua mix said “give me some pizza or I will start a war!” So I get her some pizza. “good now get me a treat!” she yells so I get a twisty then I ask “how can you talk?” “I’ve always been able to talk” she responds “choco,” choco is my cousin’s dog then choco comes up and picks up Lulu and then runs to my parents room I followed her and saw choco open a box for Lulu and Lulu jumped into the box then choco so I followed them and saw a big pink palest. 

PARt TWO A CAT🐱 PROBLEM. 

It was under attack!  from some white cats throwing smelly eggs but when they saw Lulu they immediately ran but it was to slow Lulu shot a wooden bow that hit a cat in the bottom right leg but they still got away “I can’t believe those cats I should wipe them out!”she yelled “no!” I say quickly “why” “some people like cats” “why all they do is make you go inside then outside again and again”she ask “you do that to”I point out because “I’m the dog queen” she says as she gets a crown “then make a treat bot!” I yell “the cat tooth it “but we got you at a shelter” I yell “a royal shelter “what did you do to make the cats mad?” I ask “bark cats say that it’s illegal to bark I’ll talk to them if you show me the way she pointed to a big piece of yarn 🧶 so I start running there and see my friend ozzy “ozzy!” I yell “hi”he replies “did you know that the cat hates the dogs for barking?” I ask “what!” He replies “I’ll talk to them!”he said then walked into the yarn 🧶. He came out a minute later and happily said “they just made a peace treaty ✌️:)