Week 1 Polished Piece

THE WEIRD DAY

BY: DYLAN NIYOGI

One day in summer at my house my mom, dad, sister, and me were all bored and suddenly my dad said “LET'S GO TO THE PARK!” My mom, sister, and I all said,“YEAH THAT IS A GREAT IDEA DAD! Two minutes later we left the house to start walking to the park…Later we were at Washington park. We noticed that all the people at the park my family new. We were so surprised that everyone at the park we knew. My sister and me went out and played with our friends. Soon me and my sister got tired so we asked our mom,“Can we go back home?” My mom said, “Yes you, we can go back home.” Later we were all at home,and we had a great time.

Week 1 Golden Lines

Day 1

Sometimes I ask my dad if I can watch tv he says no.

Day 2

Than if someone gets lost you can find them easier.

Day 3

One day I went in the woods and when I was walking suddenly I heard something and it was loud. One day at my house my mom, dad, sister, and me were all bored and suddenly my dad said,“LETS GO TO THE PARK!” Two minutes later we left the house and started walking.

Day 4

6:30 I wake up and have a morning snack.

Day 5

People eat some animals like cows and pigs. Sometimes animals are bad because some animals will eat you like tigers,lions, and bears.

Week 2 Golden Lines

Day 6

Dear family, I found the most interesting 🤨 thing in my backpack 🎒 .

It was a magical 🧙‍♀️ owl 🦉 that was in my backpack. 

It could help do chores and it could clean up the house 🏠 

When it gets dirty.

Boba is the best snack because it’s sweet and it has boba 🧋 balls to.

Ring ring! Ring ring!I woke up and then I brushed my teeth 🦷 and cleaned my suddenly the door 🚪 bell rang.

Day 7

When I opened it it bursted with energy and it smelled like tacos 🌮.

Day 8

Watching a movie 🍿 at home 🏠 is better because you get free food/snacks.

Day 9

I will be able to sleep in a 🚀.

Day 10

you will have fun.

Week 2 Polished Piece

The Power 

One stormy night it was cold and once it was the morning I woke up and went down stairs and I noticed that my dog kona had died. Once my sister woke up she said,“What happened?” I said in sadness,“Kona died.”my sister Mia got sad to.Then in the afternoon she tried to cheer me up by taking me to my favorite place to eat 🌮🌯🌮for lunch but that was not even close to making me happy 😃 again.Then she tried to cheer me 🆙 by taking me to the movies 🍿🖥️ with me but that did not work either.Once it was dinner time she tried again but I was still sad 😔😞😓.When it was night time I noticed that there was a falling star ⭐️🌟💫but Iwas curious so I ran to the fallen star. It landed in the forest 🏕️🌳so Iwas a bit scared then suddenly I found the 🌟 I wanted to touch it so I did then I felt powerful then I thought what dinosaurs 🦕 looked like and then I went back in time and I exclaimed,“what happened did I just go back in time?”I freaked out and said,“If I can go through time then I can get my dog 🐕 Kona back and not be sad.That means first I need to go to the time were I got Kona then I will need to go to the time were I woke up and was not happy so then I will be happy again. I cheered,“Horay whoo yes”Then suddenly I went to the time were I first got Kona in a flash I was at the right time so I got Kona and again in a flash I went to the write time when I got sad but instead I was happy for the rest of my life but I still got to go through time so it was very weird that day.