Week 1 Polished Piece

The Golf Lesson

Did you Know that the longest golf hitter can hit the ball 420 yards! But golf isn’t just about that!First you are trying to get the ball in the hole in the least amount of shots .second there is an amount of shots you are supposed to get the ball into the hole which is called a par so if you get the ball in the hole in the amount of shots that you are supposed to get the ball in the hole then you get a par.Third if you get the ball in the hole in one less shot then par then you get a birdie and if you get the ball in the hole in one more shot then par than you get a bogey.Fourth a golf course has 18 holes and some rules . First even if you just hit the ball one centimeter it counts as a shot . Second if you are in the bunker if you touch the sand it counts as a one shot penalty after you get out of the bunker then you have to rake it up. Third you can’t step in between a person who’s putting and the hole . Fourth if you’re ball is out of bounds then it is a two shot penalty if it’s not able to be hit and you have to take a drop. Fifth if you’re ball is in the way of another ball and that ball is the person who’s putting the ball than you have to mark your ball. That is all the rules of a golf course.

Week 1 Golden Lines

Day 1

Because it’s mainly used to make you know the teachers.

Day 2

He has a very annoying little brother who puts blames on him.

Day 3

One Day I found a baby dinosaur it looked like a trex

Day 4

Did you know that you use math every day.

Day 5

Did you know that the longest golf hitter can hit a ball 420 yards. 

Week 2 Golden Lines

Day 6

Did you know that there is over ten flavors of lays. 

Day 7

Did you know that there is over five flavors of cake. 

Day 8

this shows that nighttime is worse than day time.

Day 9

did you know that out of every 1000 people only 7 become doctors. 

Day 10

I disagree basketball is better than soccer.

Week 2 Polished Piece

The Superhero Birthday

Did you know that you can’t kill people with immortality. I woke up brushed teeth then I went downstairs. I was exited it was my birthday today and I’m turning 11 today. When I got downstairs my family was all ready waiting for me”happy birthday Ethan “,thay yelled at me. Then I ate my cake with my little brother Alexander then I went for a walk with some money “it’s a nice day”, I said. Then in a robert with a knife 🔪 came”, he he he “,he said .                                                             

Then stabbed me in the back but the knife just bounced off my body. Then I looked behind me and I saw the robber could this mean I have superpowers.  Then I kept walking then I bought some shǎu lǒng baú.