United 131
David Xiao
David Xiao
Rake, a 49 year old pilot. He is the captain of United Airlines flight 131.
Michael Reese, he is 35 years old, a skinny person, and is the first officer of United Airlines Flight 131.
Billy Sermon, he is 40 years old and is the flight attendant in charge of taking care of the passengers during the flight.
Passenger 1, a 30-year-old Indian man from Ft Lauderdale with a bright personality.
Passenger 2, a 30-year-old woman from New York with a bright personality.
Radio, the Ft Lauderdale control tower. The speaker is very young, has a calm personality, and speaks in an American accent.
F-16 Pilot, he is 20 years old and has very good flight experience. Has a calm personality and speaks in an American accent.
Flight attendant 1, he is 21 years old and he is inexperienced.
Synopsis: It is 3 days after American Airlines flight 587 crashed in New York City. United Airlines Flight 131's crew are on their edge because of this incident. After takeoff, United Airlines flight 131 flies out of control due to the aft pressure bulkhead of the plane uploading in the back of the plane. There are 211 passengers on board. Michael Reese, Billy Sermon, and John Rake try to save their plane from crashing.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 COCKPIT FT LAUDERDALE AIRPORT 11/15/2001 5:30 AM
The air is hot and humid and there is little wind. Right on Ft Lauderdale Airport's tarmac sits United Airlines Flight 131. The fully fueled Boeing 777 is waiting for passengers to get boarded. The flight is bound for New York City. The terminal where the passengers of United Airlines Flight 131 are waiting is very crowded. Flight Attendant Billy Sermon and the other eight flight attendants are cleaning the cabin. They are still anxious about American Airlines flight 587 and tired from waking up very early. Meanwhile, Captain John Rake and Michael Reese are doing their preflight checks.
JOHN RAKE
Hydraulics check.
MICHAEL REESE
Radio check.
JOHN RAKE
Flaps check.
MICHAEL REESE
Fuel is filled check. Both of the
engine disks are very old.
JOHN RAKE
I think we will make it. Don't worry.
Billy Sermon enters the cockpit to see if the pilots are ready for flight.
BILLY SERMON
Michael. John. Is everything alright?
Need breakfast or anything?
JOHN RAKE
Everything is alright Mr. Sermon. No
need for breakfast.
MICHAEL REESE
I am all good as well.
MICHAEL REESE
Captain Rake, how long have you been
flying?
JOHN RAKE
19 years.
MICHAEL REESE
Ever try to save a plane from
crashing?
JOHN RAKE
Once.
MICHAEL REESE
This is my first time flying for real.
BILLY SERMON
(Nervous) Hey, I heard you guys
talking about the engine disks. Are we
able to fly safely? I heard from other
pilots that metal fatigue in the
engine disk can lead to devastating
accidents.
JOHN RAKE
We will be fine. Thanks for your
concern.
BILLY SERMON
The cabin is ready for boarding the
passengers. We will be carrying 200
passengers today.
JOHN RAKE
That is a lot of passengers to take
care of, so I worry that boarding will
take a long time. Fortunately, all
systems are looking good, fuel is
loaded, and the hydraulics are
functioning perfectly. We can start
boarding the passengers.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 CABIN
Flight attendant 1 starts opening the doors and puts his hands near the release life raft lever.
BILLY SERMON
Hey. Don't turn that lever. Turn the
bottom one or the life rafts will
deploy.
FLIGHT ATTENDANT 1
Ok.
INT. FT LAUDERDALE INTERNATIONAL GATE A1 11/15/2001 5:45 AM Billy Sermon walks to the microphone.
BILLY SERMON
Everyone, we are going to start
boarding now. First class passengers
will board first, then the rest of you
will board the plane.
The first class passengers walk to the gate. Billy Sermon collects the boarding passes and picks up the microphone.
BILLY SERMON
Now, the rest of the passengers will
start boarding.
The rest of the passengers are relieved to start boarding the plane. They grabbed their belongings and started to walk towards the gate.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 COCKPIT 11/15/2001 6:00 AM MOVING
The plane taxied to the runway and the pilots await instructions from the control tower. Meanwhile, Billy Sermon and the flight attendants check if the passengers are safe for take off.
RADIO
United 131, this is Ft Lauderdale
Control Tower. Before entering
Georgia, please contact Atlanta
Traffic Control for navigation. Thank
you.
MICHAEL REESE
Copy that Ft Lauderdale Control.
Billy Sermon knocks on the door.
BILLY SERMON
This is Billy. Just want to let you
know, we are clear for takeoff. I am
the only one that is not strapped. I
will let you know when I am strapped
in.
Billy Sermon quickly walks to his seat and straps in. Then,
He grabs the phone and calls the cockpit.
BILLY SERMON
(With phone to the mouth) I am
strapped in.
MICHAEL REESE
All right.
JOHN RAKE
You have control, Rookie?
MICHAEL REESE
I have control.
First officer Michael Reese radios the control tower
MICHAEL REESE
Ft Lauderdale Control, this is United
131. We are ready for take off.
FT LAUDERDALE CONTROL
United 131, this is Ft Lauderdale
Control. You are clear for takeoff.
Michael Reese pushes the two throttles forward. The noise of the engines increased rapidly. The wind from the engines got stronger. The plane started accelerating and rumbling. As Michael Reese pushes the throttles even more. The rumbling and engine noise steadily increased. It kept increasing, increasing, increasing, and increasing.
JOHN RAKE
V1.
MICHAEL REESE
Rotate.
The plane rotates 30 degrees and the tail section hits the runway hard.
MICHAEL REESE
What was that?
JOHN RAKE
Nothing. Just a scratch. Just watch
the elevators next time.
MICHAEL REESE
Ok.
The plane lifts off the ground. The rumbling stopped and the plane was in the air.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 CABIN MOVING
The Boeing 777 climbs to 20000 fit within 10 minutes. The plane is now 50 miles away from the airport. The passengers are calmly minding their own business. Many are listening to music on their phones, talking, or sleeping. Meanwhile, a conversation starts between two passengers.
PASSENGER 1
(Nervous) Hey.
PASSENGER 2
(Happily) Hi. What's up?
PASSENGER 1
(Nervous) Just afraid of heights. Any
advice.
PASSENGER 2
(Happily) You can take a nap. If you
can't do that, turn down the shades.
PASSENGER 1
(Nervous) Ok.
PASSENGER 2
(Calmly) Relax bud. We won't crash.
Before Passenger 1 could say his next words, a huge explosion takes place on the back of the plane. The plane loses cabin pressure and the oxygen masks drop. The passengers scream as they put on their oxygen masks. Then, the plane banks 60 degrees to the left and dives.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 COCKPIT MOVING
The pilots remain calm and start solving the problem. As captain John Rake turns the joystick right, Michael Reese radios Lauderdale Control Center.
MICHAEL REESE
Mayday Mayday Mayday. This is United
Airlines flight 131. We have an
equipment malfunction and we need to
return back to the airport for an
emergency landing. Both engines are
functioning but there is an explosion
in the back of the plane and we have
lost all hydraulics except for the
ailerons. We have the rudder jammed to
the left; therefore, we are banking
sharply and we are losing altitude.
RADIO
United Airlines flight 131, please fix
your problem, turn 180 degrees, and
descend to 6000 ft.
The plane continues to bank to the left and it keeps diving. The pilots kept turning their joysticks, but the plane keeps diving and banking. The pilots try pulling the joystick, but the plane keeps diving and banking.
JOHN RAKE
I have an idea. Reduce power on the
left engine and increase power on the
right engine. Then, increase power for
both engines.
MICHAEL REESE
What!? What will that do?
JOHN RAKE
Just do it.
Michael Reese pulls back the throttle for the left engine and pushes the throttle forward for the right engine. Meanwhile, the plane starts to bank right. Then, Michael Reese pushes both throttles forward. The plane is now leveled with the nose facing Ft Lauderdale airport. After that, Billy Sermon enters the cockpit to check on the pilots.
BILLY SERMON
What happened!
MICHAEL REESE
There was an explosion in the back and
it destroyed two of our hydraulic
systems, which left the elevators
loose and the rudder jammed to the
left. Only our Ailerons work. We need
your help radioing the control tower.
BILLY SERMON
Ok.
Billy Sermon turns on the radio and talks to the control tower.
BILLY SERMON
Ft Lauderdale Control, this is United
Airlines flight 131. We have fixed our
current problem and we are headed
towards the airport.
RADIO
United 131, you are clear to land on
any runway. We also have two f 16s
from Homestead Airbase to surveil you.
They have arrived at your current
position.
Two f 16s approach the rear of the plane. Billy Sermon radios f 16s.
BILLY SERMON
F 16s, this is United Airlines flight
131. What happened to us?
F 16 PILOT
Half of your horizontal stabilizer is
gone. The remaining part of the rudder
is jammed to the left. Also, your aft
pressure bulkhead is damaged.
JOHN RAKE
This is why we don't go rough on the
elevators when taking off Rookie!
MICHAEL REESE
(Frantically) Sorry! Sorry!
JOHN RAKE
We have bigger problems!
Then, the plane starts to climb rapidly for three seconds, then dive for five seconds. The plane continues this action and the pilots and the flight attendant become startled.
JOHN RAKE
The loss of hydraulics for the
elevators causes the plane to climb
and dive. Take control of the
throttles. Remember, push the
throttles for climbing, pull the
throttles to descend.
Michael Reese pushes the engine throttles when the plane dives for five seconds and pulls the engine throttles when the plane climbs for three seconds. Then, the engine disks explode and destroy the elevators.
JOHN RAKE
Shut down both engines.
MICHAEL REESE
Ok.
Michael Reese pulls the throttles back on both engines and shuts both engines down. Then the plane dives.
MICHAEL REESE
We are currently 2000 feet above the
ground and we are 20 miles away from
the airport. Both our engines have
failed. We cannot make it to the
airport and we have to ditch the plane
in the Atlantic.
BILLY SERMON
Ft Lauderdale Control, this is United Airlines flight 131. We are currently 2000 feet above the ground and we are 20 miles away from the airport. Both our engines have failed. We cannot make it to the airport and we have to ditch the plane in the Atlantic.
RADIO
Copy that.
MICHAEL REESE
Lets lower the flaps to cancel the
dive.
JOHN RAKE
Ok.
MICHAEL REESE
We are at 500 feet and still diving.
Michael Reese pulls the flap lever to the highest level. The plane's nose starts to aim upwards.
MICHAEL REESE
Dive is cancelled out. Billy, tell
everyone to go into brace position.
Billy Sermon gets up, opens the cockpit door and walks into the cabin.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 CABIN MOVING
The passengers in the cabin of the plane were frantic. Some are crying, others are praying, and the rest just stood silent. The air was cold and there was luggage everywhere. Overall, it was nearly silent. Billy Sermon walks into the cabin.
BILLY SERMON
Everybody in brace position. Feet flat
on the floor, head down as far as
possible. Brace for impact. Heads down
stay down.
The plane descends rapidly to the altitude of 100 ft.
OTHER FLIGHT ATTENDANTS
Brace for impact. Heads down stay
down. Brace for impact. Heads down
stay down. Brace for impact. Heads
down stay down. Brace for impact.
Heads down stay down. Brace for
impact. Heads down stay down.
The passengers obeyed and went into brace position.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 COCKPIT MOVING
The pilots use the ailerons and flaps to put the plane in landing position.
MICHAEL REESE
(yelling) Here we go!
AIRCRAFT INSTRUMENT INDICATOR
Too low terrain. Pull up. Too low
terrain. Pull up. 30....20.....10....
The plane splashes into the water flinging the pilots front and back. The plane dips 5 feet into the water, then resurfaces. The F 16s following the plane pulls up and climbs and circles the plane. Then, United Airlines flight 131 decelerates and comes to a stop. The pilots run into the cabin.
INT. UNITED AIRLINES FLIGHT 131 CABIN
Water starts rapidly flooding the back of the plane. The passengers await instructions from the pilots.
JOHN RAKE
(Yelling) Evacuate now. Flight
attendants. Open the doors and the
rafts. Passengers, get the life vest
at the bottom of your seat and come
out of the plane in a a calm and
orderly fashion. We don't have much
time so let's move! Flight attendants.
Do a head count on each raft. There
are 211 of us.
The passengers grabbed their life vests, lined up in the aisles, and proceeded to the door in a calm and orderly fashion. Flight attendant 1 pulled the release life raft lever and the life raft releases. Then, one at a time, walked onto the life raft. When the life rafts are full, the flight attendants cut the rope that is holding the life raft to the plane and rows away from the plane.
INT. DESTROYER USS CHARLIE MOVING
It has been 4 hours until USS Charlie picked the passengers from the plane wreck. The destroyer was damp and space was limited. The air was cold as ice, crowded with many sailors and passengers. USS Charlie rocked side to side making some passengers sea sick. The passengers all gathered in the dining area while the sailors gave them medical attention. First officer Michael Reese walks to John Rake to report Billy's information on the passengers.
MICHAEL REESE
Captain, I have reports from Mr.
Sermon. Everyone got onto the life
rafts.
JOHN RAKE
Both of us will be investigated for
pulling the joystick too much and
flying with old engine disks. You need
to know how to take responsibility for
your actions.
MICHAEL REESE
Sometimes, I wonder... is it luck or
skill?
JOHN RAKE
Just keep flying, my friend.
Grade: 9
Bio: In his free time, David Xiao likes to write scripts, play the violin, play video games, run two YouTube channels, and film videos. He has been filming for 2 years, Youtubing for 8 months, and playing the violin for 8 years.
What is your main source of inspiration?
My main source of inspiration is the movie Sully, Flight, and the accident of United Airlines flight 232. In both of these situations, the pilots managed to land their planes in an impossible and hopeless situation.
What motivated you to write this piece?
What motivated me to write this piece is that I am interested in airplane accidents and I want to show the audience the hardships when landing a crippled plane.
Do you write sporadically or regularly?
I write sporadically due to my frequent violin activities.
What was the most difficult part of your writing process for this work?
The most difficult part was the development of the story, especially from developing the climax part to the resolution of the story.
What message do you hope to convey to the reader through your piece?
I hope to convey to the reader how hard it is to land a plane, how small mistakes can cause catastrophic situations, and how someone needs to move on and learn from those small mistakes.