In this second term, we are going to focus on the art of critical thinking. You probably hear teachers talk about it a lot, but what does it actually mean? Lots of people (including your lecturers) have different views on what critical thinking is and what they're looking for from students, so be prepared to be flexible! However, there are three things that will always help you to be critical in your writing:
Last term we looked at formulating a stance and a thesis statement in week four, and in weeks eight, nine and ten we practised demonstrating wider reading by using our own language to report what other people say, and to comment on what they've said.
We'll continue to refine these skills in the second term, but our first few writing classes are going to look closely at language use, including word choice and structures, that help us develop our own voice and opinions.
Our first lesson looks at telling the difference between a fact and opinion. This is something that's easy at first but hard to master because many people, and especially academics, are good at using language subtly to present opinions as facts.
Some texts we read are factual, and intended to convey information, such as a course textbook, while others will be more opinion based, such as a blog. Some are opinions presented as facts, such as Fox News.
In week six last term we looked at several claims and identified which ones would need supporting evidence. Read through them again, and decide what evidence we would need in order for these statements to be called facts. For example would statistical information be relevant, or opinions of experts? Are there any which are just common knowledge? The first one is done for you.
Without supporting evidence, the reader is unable to tell if these are facts or opinions. However, distinguishing fact from opinion is often not a black and white case because it depends on how likely people are to disagree with what's been said. The earth is round and species evolve through natural selection are facts that are supported by quite a lot of scientific and observational evidence, but there are still people who disagree with them.
We're going to look at an article which recently appeared in The Guardian, and talks about racial identity. The issue of race in society is very controversial, which means there are a lot of people with lots of opinions. This is good for us because it means we get a lot of practice with critical reading!
I am white. As an academic, consultant and writer on white racial identity and race relations, I speak daily with other white people about the meaning of race in our lives. These conversations are critical because, by virtually every measure, racial inequality persists, and institutions continue to be overwhelmingly controlled by white people. While most of us see ourselves as “not racist”, we continue to reproduce racist outcomes and live segregated lives.
In the racial equity workshops I lead for American companies, I give participants one minute, uninterrupted, to answer the question: “How has your life been shaped by your race?” This is rarely a difficult question for people of color, but most white participants are unable to answer. I watch as they flail, some giving up altogether and waiting out the time, unable to sustain 60 seconds of this kind of reflection. This inability is not benign, and it certainly is not innocent. Suggesting that whiteness has no meaning creates an alienating – even hostile – climate for people of color working and living in predominantly white environments, and it does so in several ways.
If I cannot tell you what it means to be white, I cannot understand what it means not to be white. I will be unable to bear witness to, much less affirm, an alternate racial experience. I will lack the critical thinking and skills to navigate racial tensions in constructive ways. This creates a culture in which white people assume that niceness is the answer to racial inequality and people of color are required to maintain white comfort in order to survive.
An inability to grapple with racial dynamics with any nuance or complexity is ubiquitous in younger white people who have been raised according to an ideology of colorblindness. I have been working with large tech companies whose average employees are under 30 years old. White employees are typically dumbfounded when their colleagues of color testify powerfully in these sessions to the daily slights and indignities they endure and the isolation they feel in overwhelmingly white workplaces. This pain is especially acute for African Americans, who tend to be the least represented.
This article was taken from the Opinion section of the Guardian, so we already know what kind of language to expect before we start reading. However, if we referred to diAngelo's article in our own writing, what would be the best reporting verb?
We have seen how hedging can make statements more agreeable. Compare:
Which of the following would be better for introducing the writer's opinion:
We looked at some examples of reporting verbs in Week 8 last term, alongside Unit 30 of Academic Vocabulary in Use: Reporting what others say.
Choose from one of the topics below that we looked at in week 6, and write a short paragraph on Google Classroom (approximately 100 words ) which conveys your view on the topic. Remember to refer to supporting evidence where possible, choosing your reporting verb carefully, and using appropriate hedging language.