started the sketches of the bookcovers + found inspiration and started moodboards and stuff
first looked for some inspiration for the book covers for which I kinda just grabbed my own favorites and the ones that fit the vibe of the book I used.
I am mostly interested in the more minimalistic ones since a fully illustrated one doesn't really fit the vibe or atleast not easily in my style so im going to go with something like the name of the wind cover or the little thieves books.
This also fits better in my opinion since the book is so heavily putting the attention on details of the buildings and settings that way I can put it in there aswell
I still have a illustration cover idea that I want to try out I just don't know how well it's going to work out but we'll figure it out as we go along.
Oh and I need to work on my angel designs so I can fit that in somewhere aswell.
More random inspo images >>
these were some of the first tries at figuring out the designs of the angels
like Daniel suggested im first figuring out angel and robot designs seperately to later combine them in some way
I am really happy with the colors on that specific one tho! they fit the vibe of the book perfect in my opninion
these designs definitely need some more work but so far im pretty happy with what ive got
I have a few ideas I want to work out (so far 3 which might turn into 4)
The first one is pretty much my style something fun and cartoony and the other are more toward the vibe of the book?
I also might make one based off the angels but im not far enough with those designs yet to do so
things i still need to do: character designs > with using the color pallete ive got in mind rn, the angel designs
homework:
book cover done > doesn't have to be the final final since you can always alter it a bit later on
feedback covers:
-first one doesnt fit the book (which I know and am aware of I just want to do it because it's fun)
-people who have read the book lean more towards the second one because the third might be too busy while people who haven't lean towards the third one because of the more interesting compesition
-try and figure out how to make the third one work since it could
-make them bigger theyre too small atm to really see it well
-work on the colors a bit more. they look good together but maybe try and figure out values a bit
-the second one might be too similar to the book cover as it is now
huiswerk voor deze les:
book cover 'af'
Benoem drie belangrijke thema's van het boek. Hier heb je al onderzoek naar gedaan in de eerste twee weken bij de onderzoeksles. Maak per thema minimaal 3 schetsen waarin personages en omgeving een belangrijke rol spelen. Varieer in aanpak en inhoud, experimenteer met verschillende technieken en materialen.
1. Haal 5-7 belangrijke, representatieve gebeurtenissen uit het boek. Beschrijf elke scène in een titel, een thumbnail en één of twee zinnen.
2. Maak een charactersheet en werk het uit in de best passende stijl.
haat dit maar dat is oke
leuk maar past niet echt bij de doelgroep over het algemeen
conclusion homework:
I am struggling a little bit.
I like the digital ones in theorie but I just can't get them to look like a bookcover
Plan now is just to keep working on it and use more collage ish ways I guess.
Overall I do like the design of they clock one but it just isn't working out in my style so far
feedback 'affe' cover:
heel eerlijk hij was veel positiever dan ik dus ik ben happy
meer patronen en textuur
digitaal en analoog combineren (patronen toevoegen bij de klok doormiddel van zinnen uit het boek in arabisch)
nummers weg halen
contrast tussen kleuren verbeteren in het midden
meer vuur zodat het midden interessanter is
beeldverhaal:
formaat; 1 A3 page
at least 2 panels
standing
booktrailer:
trailer > 30-60sec
1080x1920 px
Finding the moment:
haal 5 - 7 belangrijke, representatieve geberutenissen uit het boek.
beschrijf elke scene in
een titel
een thumbnail
een of twee zinnen
kies 3 scenes uit de gekozen representatieve gebeurtenissen en visualiseer deze dmv 3 schetsen op minimaal A5
je hebt uiteindelijk dus 9 schetsen
so I had some trouble getting down the thumbnail sketches for my ideas so my plan was to first draw all the character sheets
I felt like because I hadn't really clearly worked out how I wanted the characters to look I had a though time imagining them in the different scenes and I just couldnt get it on paper
homework:
finish the lesson's task
storyboard for the BV
storyboard trailer
character sketches / sheets (Fatma, Hadia, Siti, Abigail, Al Jahiz, Ahmad)
feedback Nicole cover: combineer het analoge met digitale ook > dat papier gebruiken voor het beeldverhaal met de duidelijke silhouetten leek haar ook erg gaaf. Ze was wel positief :)
huiswerk:
maak je beeldverhaal af doe onderzoek naar kaders en hoe je de tekst erin wil verwerken
feedback:
add title to clear up the confusion with starting at the bottom
make the top two close up panels bigger so it's easier to see where to go
add orange to the rest of the panels to have a more cohesive look
put the text above Zagros higher
desaturate flames a bit they grab too much attention
make it so that the background elements aren't fighing for attention as much (get rid of lineart)
see if it looks better with flames or without
> flames look better but try and make them follow the flow
too much empty space at the bottom so lower the thing
choose a different font for the text and maybe try the flame color
heb een animatic af schiet me neer man
I've got two ideas that I want to combine depending on what music I add so do with that what you can i guess
<< final storyboard
feedback Daniel
Hi Mintje,
Thanks for the mail.
Currently your trailer is almost one minute long, and the brief says that it should be 30 second.
As it stands right now, it's too long and you won't reach the deadline with a finished product.
So I suggest to eliminate a few scenes/shots.
The stairs in the beginning and the flames at the end are wrapping your trailer nicely so I'd keep them.
As for any other shot/scene - it's up to you.
The music currently feels detached from the visual content.
It does work well at the end when it speeds up / becomes more dramatic - together with the flames.
Try to look at other trailers and see how they use music in it. It can serve as inspiration.
Gr,
Daniel
aanpassingen:
heb de scene dat archibald bij de deur komt weggehaald aangezien die niet veel toevoegde (nu is die van 60s naar 35s toe)
made a halfway decent plan on how to finish this so here are all the loose bits of the animation
alle scenes aanpassen + textuur
movements are too robotic
there is an in and out movement in the pace that improves the flow
3D is very minimal = not needed
with texture in the background
Doel shot:
Illustrating the start of the book and the anticipation it build. The first chapter really sucked you into the book and the action which made for a great start of the book. I wanted this to also be included in my trailer.
te sloom en happerig in beide beweging en wolkje
tempo is versneld en loop soepeler
textuur in de achtergrond
Doel shot:
The starting sentence of the book is literally 'Archibald disliked stairs.' which I though was quite funny so I wanted him to look annoyed/tired after seeing the stairs he has to walk.
vuur is matig en loopt niet lekker, ook is de beweging van de cape haperig
loopt sneller, maar het op en neer hoppen is niet het beste
loopt lekkerder
with added fire
Doel shot:
Illustrating the 'start' of the plot. It is the scene where Al Jahiz burns the brotherhood and the murder mystery of the book starts.
This again was a major plot point of the book that I wanted to include.
camera bewegingen zijn heel robot achtig en connecties tussen shots zorgen voor verwarring bij kijker
dynamischer en soepeler
camera beelden beter en Hadia al laten zien zodat ze niet uit het niks komt
dynamischer en soepeler
niet veel veranderd naast het hoedje van Fatma weggehaald aangezien het niet veel toevoegde
de rare haper is weg hier
met textuur
met textuur
met textuur
met textuur
Doel shot:
Introducing the characters and finishing off the start of the book.
I went with different compossitions.
The second one is over the shoulder to show that they are talking to eachother about the body while the fourth one is so that you can easily see that Fatma is sighing because of Hadia
de rand gaf voor een of andere reden wat issues en heeft een witte omringing
de rand gefixt beter
met textuur
Doel shot:
Introducing the obstacles they meet on the way
in an attempt to make the animation less childish in style I wanted to attempt adding textures.
right now im doing this is toon boom and its difficult as hell but were working with something
im slowly figuring out the nodes view and stuff like that so have a bunch of screenshots of that
I made particles so that the fire would be looping since its difficult to animate
ben tevreden met dit resultaat wel
met eerste poging vuur
texturen
met textuur zonder vuur
met laatste poging vuur
de glow effect werkte nie echt op deze dus even kijken of ik een combinatie kan maken met de andere
Doel shot:
Final shot to hopefully get some anticipation going and hopefully want to find out what's happening and read the book.
It's the fight scene at the end where they come accrose the ifrit.
I'm happy with how the animation itself looks rn I think I improved it enough by reanimating a few scenes and changing the camera movements.
The only thing i might need to redo is the timing. But that depends on what music I decide on.
Other than that I need to add an ending scene + final paper texture overlays
01 > animatie af!
02 > find music!
03 > edit everything together + add ending scene and textures
04 > inleveren! + argumentatie per scene noteren en presentatie starten
I'm expecting this to come up because of the style I chose for my animation so here are my reasons.
I have read almost 150 books in the past 2,5 years (both ya and adult) so I feel like I've got a good idea of what qualifies as an adult and ya novel now.
There are arguments for both:
adult:
complex themes (but simplistic handling)
intricate worldbuilding (but at the cost of the plot and characters)
sophisticated language and tone
ya:
lack of character depth and improvement
plot driven (only cuz it is definitely not character driven)
simplistic handling of themes
clear good vs evil
I've compared it too several adult and ya books I've read as to give an idea on why I feel like it is an YA book that wants to be an adult book
First I compared it to Babel by RF Kuang
In this book Kuang delves deeply into themes like colonialism, the violence of imperialism, racism, and the moral dilemmas of academia. She uses intricate historical parallels and heavy philosophical questions to challenge readers, making it thought provoking in ways that sollidify it's stand as an adult novel. The themes are not only central but explored in great depth.
Meanwhile A Master of Djinn also touches on some of these themes but these elements are often woven into the backround rather than explored in depth which makes it fall more to the background which can feel like it lacks the gravitas.
Same goes for the characters. Kuang's characters are very complex with moral conflicts, personal growth and layered relationships. You can see this in the main character robin who grapples with intense inner conflict, betrayal, and identity issues.
For Fatma in the other book this isn't the case. Fatma while a compelling and fun character, is not very developed. Her stroy is driven by external plot points rather than a transformative inner jouney.
The world building is the part where I do think it fits into the category of adult literature, but it overshadows everything which makes it even more clear how lacking it is in the plot and charachter depth.
Secondly I compared it to The Priory of the Orange Tree by Samantha Shannon
This book is an epic fantasy. Thematically, it addresses power, gender dynamics, faith, and policial intrige with characters deeply embedden in these tensions. In amod the scope is smaller and more contained focussing on Cairo (which is not a bad thing). The themes, such as colonialism and social justice, are present but explored less deeply and ofter secondairy to the action and adventure.
Shannon's novel features a large cast of multiple POV'S. The multi pov structure allow each characters personal journey and growth to unfold in depth, giving readers insight into their motivation, insecurities and moral struggles. This complexity makes it allign more with the adult literature than amod where Fatma is the primary focus. This ofc doesn't automatically make it a ya book but her arc is less complex with a clear sense of right and wrong that leaves little room for moral ambiguity. The supporting characters are also engaging but lack the development or emotional growth in Priory. The same can be said for Fatma herself.
Thirdly I compared it to the YA book Sofi and the bone song by Adrienne Tooley
Sofi is a ya fantasy that emphasizes character growth, emotional journeys and personal stakes. All of these are features that appeal to a YA audience.
In Sofi her journey is deeply tied to her sense of identity and her struggle to prove her worth. Similarly amod explores Fatmas sense of identity as a young woman in a male-dominated profession. Her journey to solve the mystery while starying true to herself and her values mirror YA themes of personal discovery and navigating complex social dynamics.
In Sofi the main character is a determined, talented protagonis who is dedicated to her art and willing to do whatever it takes to protect her father's legacy. Fatma is similarly strong and independent, breaking norms as one of the few female agents in the Ministry. Fatma's drive and self-assuredness are relatable qualities for ya readers looking for role models of empowerment and independence.
For the plot it is also similar. Amod is a plot driven book that has a clear sense of direction.
In different ways amod shares the qualities YA novels and adult novels. I rest in the middle of it not reaching the adult novel level but also having more adult like aspects than the normal YA standard.
This is why I believe it to be a YA book and not an adult one. Since adult readers would be easily dissapointed and I can't say the same the other way around for YA readers.