please revise this message: Let's set something up for next week perhaps? I strongly desire to improve my singing ability. However, I think that among my many gifts, singing is not one of them, and I wonder how much anyone can really help me. You sing phenomenally, not sure if you'll be able to teach me, but I am willing to learn.
In the meantime, if you can handle the cringe of my tone-deafness, complete lack of rhythm and obsessiveness with uploading poor quality content, I literally have more than 2,000 videos across 30 channels, with many being multiple takes of attempted covers of me trying to sing. Maybe as a teacher, you might find something that I might be able to improve upon. Or at least find some insights as to where to start, or discover some key flaw that could be overcome.
To find the music videos, you might have to wade through all the other random clutter that I upload —videos covering everything I’m passionate about: from science, philosophy, theology, sunsets, cute dog videos, tutorials, commentary, comedy, parody, wisdom, guitar and piano covers, oil painting, video games, politics—whatever subjects spoke to my soul.
ChatGPT said:
Sure! Here's a more polished and conversational revision of your message that still keeps your voice and intent intact:
Hey, let’s try to set something up for next week if you’re available. I’ve got a real desire to improve my singing—even though, to be honest, I don’t think it’s one of my natural talents. Of all the gifts I might have, singing feels like the one that missed me entirely. Still, I’m willing to learn, and you sing phenomenally. I’m not sure if I’m teachable, but I’d love to try.
Fair warning: if you can handle the cringe of my tone-deaf attempts, lack of rhythm, and obsessive habit of uploading raw, unfiltered content, you’ll find I have more than 2,000 videos across 30 YouTube channels—many of them multiple takes of me trying to sing covers. Maybe, as a teacher, you’ll spot something in all that chaos—some flaw that can be fixed, or at least a place to begin.
Just a heads-up: it might take some digging to find the music videos. I post about everything I’m passionate about—science, philosophy, theology, sunsets, dogs, tutorials, commentary, comedy, parody, wisdom, guitar and piano covers, oil painting, video games, politics—basically anything that resonates with my soul.
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