Historical Review
Historical Review
Dan Miller: Historian from Calvin review on 10/17/19
Dan Miller: Historian from Calvin review on 10/17/19
- All new art from this semester (sketches through finished work). Be prepared to pitch the history and the image as it tells that story.
- All writing from new cards this semester: See the writing style guide here.
- All printed cards historical accuracy (Maddy and Megan: Bring all cards to the classroom after filming on Tuesday for Thursday review)
- Some students will need to select from the new cards that are not in the inDesign Doc and/or don't have any writing from Tony's list and write historical description for them (Bill will assign) If the student is doing the art for this character assign to them.
- Tories
- Elizabeth Murray Inman
- Grace Gowden Galloway
- Samuel Seabury
- Thomas Hutchinson
- Whigs
- Anthony Wayne
- Robert Shurtleff
- Francis Marion
- Tories
- Some students will need to select from the new cards that are not in the inDesign Doc and/or don't have any writing from Tony's list and write historical description for them (Bill will assign) If the student is doing the art for this character assign to them.
Version - BW
Review the Historical Accuracy of new cards that the students will pitch to you. Arrow through these cards to check images and descriptions.
Feedback from Dan Miller
Feedback from Dan Miller
Gage:
Gage:
- Light infantry can be dropped from the writing
Washington
Washington
- Forced to retreat from NY but turned the tide of battle at Trenton. Kept his army together through the terrible winter at valley forge.
- Brave leader instead of resilient leader
- Show him being stoic in expression
- Give him a tri-corner hat
Murray
Murray
- Spreading economic Freedom? Not sure what that means
Revere
Revere
- Use the phrase "Minute Men"
Graves
Graves
- Add rowboats full of British troops in background
Cornwallis
Cornwallis
- General - led southern invasion, lost the final battle in Yorktown
- Work on foreshortening
Tarlton
Tarlton
- Fought against the guerrilla fighter called Swamp Fox
Marion
Marion
- The Swamp Fox
- Put hair behind him
Jefferson
Jefferson
- Did not draft the constitution
- The irony still works for the declaration of independence
North
North
- Does he have a baby-ish face ?
- Add snow outside
Presentation Assessment From Bill
Presentation Assessment From Bill
The Art is looking pretty good
The Art is looking pretty good
- I can tell that you are all putting a lot of effort and creativity into the illustrations. I like the hats as a differentiate feature thread running through the illustrations.
Is everyone following writing and imaging guidelines?
Is everyone following writing and imaging guidelines?
- Not everyone seemed to know where to find these
Presentation
Presentation
- Holding up a small computer screen is not how we review projects. All students need to have their work on the Drive if they know they will not be able to plugin to the TV.
Productivity
Productivity
- Everyone should have had 2 cards finished and another one started. (except Tony).
- Most students seem to not be working on the writing. Cards are finished when both the writing and art is finished.
Civility
Civility
- Dan Miller commented after the presentation that he was surprised about some of the comments. Here are things that a civil person would not typically not do in a situation like this:
- Throw their sick teacher under the bus by indicating the class was not so great because they missed some classes.
- Express that you are not that interested in the project to a professor from another college that has volunteered a lot of his time to the project.
- Complaining that the Middle Schoolers writing is not very good and acting like it was a burden for you to have to improve it.
- Disrespect all of the people that worked on the project, including Dan (sitting in front of you), by stating that you had to "fix" their work. And doubling down on that statement when provided an opportunity to walk it back.