the steps crate a leading lines throughout the photo from start to end and the imperfectness of the people create an unsymetrical feel the photo could be more into the middle to have more of a centre shot to draw the attention in. what we did well was how everyone was lined in an interesting way to improve we could lower the exposure to see the detail in the sky.
the low exposure creates more of an omminous effect and the way he is smiling creates a mesterious feel drawing the attenion to the veiwer.the camera is focused on his nose making it more shinny and prominate.