Wow Sunny! These comments are from Teri. Your writing creates such a strong mood. I really like your 4 pieces from two weeks of Flash Fiction. Here are some specific comments:
"The Boy and the Dog": I love the first two lines and how you show the agony of the boy dangling with the Christmas lights. It's very vivid--I can really picture it. And it's a sweet, short, short story. I love how you describe the dog in the flashback. and how he rescues the boy. I would like to know why the boy chose the dog in the first place. What about the dog appealed to the boy?
"Super-Not": First I love the title. And the narrative voice is so strong. There's a lot of humor in this piece.
I like Super-Not... just - he died at the end. Whoops! -Felix from the Wednesday class
Your story, "Different," blew me away. I love the ending. It was such a surprise. --Teri
'Meh--It's Something"--What a clever personification of an old telephone in a telephone booth. You capture its loneliness quite well.
I loved your story about the Kite. The writing is so descriptive and you can really feel the kite's despair. Plus the kite has such a strong personality. Well done!