Andrew-- What an interesting set up for a story. I am intrigued to read what happens next.
Andrew-- I like the little paragraph about the red door. I like how you describe the king and his interaction with the peasants.
1/16/23-- I haven't read your writing lately, so I was very pleasantly surprised by your originality. I really love the pirate ship story as well as the one about the one that takes place in Windrixville. You are a very clever and engaging writer, and I wish you would either read your work during class or let me read something to the other students.