I really like how this drawing turned out. When I saw this paper and how the spots were placed I immediately thought of a giraffe. I think my giraffe turned out very well, I like how the giraffe is in proportion to everything else, and how I just left the original ink dots on the giraffe and didn't add any others. I like how I made the grass uneven and not perfectly straight across, it's a small thing but I feel like it made the drawing look more realistic. My favorite part of this drawing is the brids. I spent so much time on them and trying to make them look as life like as you could in a drawing. One other I think I did a good job with this drawing is the value. I spent a decent amount of time trying to get good range of shades throughout this drawing and I think I did a good job it if. Specifically around the tree and the body of the giraffe. Some things I think I could improve on, specifically for this drawing are, the giraffes legs, and the sun. I feel like I made the giraffes back legs a little to curvy, and its front legs not curvy enough. And I think I could have taken a little more time with the sun and focused on making it more wavy and proportioned.