Evolution of a D3 Claim

I have been given permission to use a colleague's claim for fellowship to illustrate the development and evolution of a D3 submission. For each stage in the drafting process I have provided my written feedback and the supporting video feedback.

D3 - SENIOR FELLOW GRID [D3].docx

Draft 1

Have a look through the 1st draft and think about the feedback you would provide to this applicant. Compare your notes to my own written feedback I have provided.

1. EXEMPLAR D3 - 1ST DRAFT.pdf

1st Draft

2. EXEMPLAR D3 - 1ST DRAFT FEEDBACK.pdf

1st Draft Feedback

1st Draft Video Feedback

Draft 2

Have a look through the 2nd draft and think about the feedback you would provide to this applicant. Compare your notes to my own writtten feedback and the video feedback I have provided.

3. EXEMPLAR D3 - 2ND DRAFT.pdf

2nd Draft

4. EXEMPLAR D3 - 2ND DRAFT FEEDBACK.pdf

2nd Draft Feedback

2nd Draft Video Feedback

Draft 3

Have a look through the 3rd draft and think about the feedback you would provide to this applicant. Compare your notes to my own writtten feedback and the video feedback I have provided.

5. EXEMPLAR D3 - 3RD DRAFT.pdf

3rd Draft

6. EXEMPLAR D3 - 3RD DRAFT FEEDBACK.pdf

3rd Draft Feedback

3rd Draft Video Feedback

Final Submission

9. EXEMPLAR D3 - FINAL SUBMISSION.pdf

Final Submission

So finally we have the applicant's final submission that was presented for consideration. Look at this draft and assess it against the criterion for D3.

Do you think this applicant's claim has met the required standard allowing you to confer Senior Fellowship? Once you have an answer - email me with your final decision (andy.clegg@port.ac.uk) and I will send you back details of the result.