Evolution of a D2 Claim
I have been given permission to use a colleague's claim for Fellowship to illustrate the development and evolution of a D2 submission. For each stage in the drafting process I have provided my written feedback and the supporting video feedback.
Use the feedback form provided here to assess for yourself whether you think the applicant aligns to the D2 criterion.
D2 - FELLOW GRID [D2] FEEDBACK.docxDraft 1
Have a look through the 1st draft and think about the feedback you would provide to this applicant. Compare your notes to my own written feedback I have provided.
SERGEANT, ALEX - 1ST DRAFT.pdf1st Draft
SERGEANT, ALEX - 1ST DRAFT FEEDBACK.pdf1st Draft Feedback
On this occasion I only provided written feedback as we did not have Panopto in place.
Draft 2
Have a look through the 2nd draft and think about the feedback you would provide to this applicant. Compare your notes to my own written feedback and the video feedback I have provided.
2ND DRAFT.pdf2nd Draft
2ND DRAFT FEEDBACK.pdf2nd Draft Feedback
2nd Draft Video Feedback
Draft 3
Have a look through the 3rd draft and think about the feedback you would provide to this applicant. Compare your notes to my own written feedback and the video feedback I have provided.
3RD DRAFT.pdf3rd Draft
3RD DRAFT FEEDBACK.pdf3rd Draft Feedback
3rd Draft Video Feedback
Final Submission
4TH DRAFT.pdfSo finally we have the applicant's final submission that was presented for consideration. Look at this draft and assess it against the criterion for D2.
Do you think this applicant's claim has met the required standard allowing you to confer Fellowship? Once you have an answer - email me with your final decision (andy.clegg@port.ac.uk) and I will send you back details of the result.