Marking Period 1 + 2
Apparently, there are many people in which have gotten sick over the past couple of years. The hospital has many patients who need help all the time, and with the high rise in illnesses, there are not enough staff to assist in diagnosing different patients. Here, we are trying to prevent unnecessary hospital trips and high capacity of sick people being in one place.
So, how can we create a safe and efficient way to get patients in and out of the hospital? The Active Near-Infrared Spectroscopy Patch (ANIRP) is a wearable, affordable, and easy-to-use device designed to measure skin elasticity and stiffness using near-infrared (NIR) technology and a mechanical actuator. Using the ANIRP Patch, it can help quickly diagnose patients getting them the help they need and allow efficient services.
What you have just read was a pitch of our Capstone project, a very important presentation centralizing what we have learned from our track class to come up with a solution to fix a possibly plaguing worldwide problem. We did extremely well on including everything we need to do. We were able to work together to brainstorm on how to revolutionize disease detection, affecting the biomedical field.
The world is covered in a wide variety of many diseases, one of which is effortless to develop and expand. When it comes to these aspects, it can lead to brutal hospital visits and sometimes even death.
Bugs like cancer, infectious diseases, wounds, and lack of hydration have risk factors in your everyday life that may affect the average person. It can impact the world in ways many audiences may not realize and can change the way the world functions.
For example, viral disease, Coronavirus, was a deadly infectious disease which took over the lives of many individuals around the world, leading to a mass increase of demises, respiratory illnesses, and enforced prolonged periods of quarantine isolations.
There were many ways in which lives around the world were changed-the loss of jobs, masks worn around, and protection and losing connection with the outside world- and as a result of this, stress and depression became a big factor that has increased in rates after the pandemic due to the loss of human connection.
This has affected many young adolescents around the world maintaining school, and even adults who may work long hours. Persistently, stress annually promotes self-harm or suicide from the wrongful influences many adults and even adolescent souls can be put under.
What you have just read was a pitch of our Capstone project, a very important presentation centralizing what we have learned from our track class to come up with a solution to fix a possibly plaguing worldwide problem. This is a contribution towards the presentation above.
This immensely sophisticated paper presented well grammar-wise and lengthwise. It's distinctive background information and safely used references made it look professional. This also included format and its foundation.
German East Africa was a colonial possession in the African Great Lakes region. It surrounded modern countries like Burundi, Rwanda, Tanzania. This colony was established in the 19th century as a part of Germany's colonial expansion. German East Africa followed indigenous religions, such as ancestor worship and belief in the spirit world. After colonization, the region was facing problems because of conflicts with Muslim disputes, along with other issues made them a prime target for colonization. Africa had its own forms of commerce, science, art and other measures of civilization long before the arrival of the colonizers.
But Colonization led to the increase, presence and influence of Christianity. The Maji-Maji rebellion was organized by Kinjekitile Ngwale who a ritualist, healer, and religious leader was. Because of these qualities, religion played a crucial role in the rebellion’s attempt in remedying colonial violence. This was a presentation that I worked on for a while in a group of 4. When presenting this, we all could have worked on our presenting considerations like maintain eye contact, confidence, or even voice projections. I would need to work on my pace considering I was talking a little bit too fast while it was my turn to start talking.
The objective of this assignment was to write an essay approaching the prompt given and supported by the numerous articles that was provided in 80 minutes. It starts with extensive pressure mixed with water and chemicals which are then transferred into cascaded rocks. Those rocks are activated to make fissures and fractures in order to collect natural gas from local shale thousands below.
Fracking also comes from a term known as “Coal Bed Methane”. Many perceive fracking differently. In this case, two articles are composed to make an argument. Oil fracking is meant to maintain the primary energy consumption of various customers. The United States was even considered the world’s second biggest energy producer with 14.7% of the world’s energy production.
The most crucial aspect when it comes to fracking is how its process affects communities through its economic stability as it simultaneously poses viral threats to various environments. Fracking could be praised for its reliability towards the economy while on the other hand it could be feared from its lethality towards humans.
I need to better on my analysis and inferences towards what I read. This also includes considerations like addressing the prompt, evidence and reasoning, writing and style, grammar and mechanics. I mainly needed further incorporate connections from my body paragraphs to my thesis statement.
The objective of this assignment was to write an essay approaching the prompt given and supported by the numerous articles that was provided in 80 minutes. A child’s mental health is extremely diverse ranging from ADHD and autism, to depressional addictions as common disorders children tend to manifest or generate more frequently as time progresses.
In other words, the negative impact of early mental health problems can persist even if mental health particularly loses its negative influence. Generally, mental health problems can presumably create disability. As a con, treatments that are meant to serve for children in need often fail to lead to long-term gains in schools and jobs. Extensive overwhelming from the world around them only gets addressed by controlling the symptoms rather than focusing on life-term possibilities.
With mental health problems comes high charts of mental disorders like children who take place in run-down facilities. The historical and typical complexity of mental health can be characterized by the eccentricities of environment, influence, and convictions in a community. I excelled or improved on addressing the prompt, evidence and reasoning, writing and style, grammar and mechanics. I got a much better score than my last writing prompt (above).