DP1 - Semester 2 Outline Submission
The Extended Essay is not an informal piece of work -- you are expected to produce formal, academic writing that is appropriate for a capable student on the verge of completing high school. This means that you can not writing your EE in the way that you talk to your friends, or in the way that many of you write to your teachers. Typical traits of academic writing include...
Avoid Using the First-Person (I, Me, We, etc.): Academic writing is impersonal. Your work and evaluation speak for itself. Rather than expressing your own opinion or views, you are providing your analysis and insight. Often, this will take the form of an argument, supported by evidence appropriate for your subject and topic. There are some times where it may be appropriate to occasionally use the first-person in your EE (and you SHOULD use the first-person in your reflections) but in general it is safest and most appropriate to be impersonal.
Tone: Again, more impersonal than personal. Even if you are writing about a topic where you have strong feelings, it is important to write with a more objective tone. This will aid you in providing counterarguments, where necessary, and in exploring the limitations of your research and methodology (as required in some subjects.) The essay is not a casual conversation, but a serious piece of academic work. Write as if you are expecting an audience of educated, professional people to read your writing... because they will!
Structure: Your essay should be purposefully organized. What is that purpose? To support your main argument. The EE is not a place for lengthy tangents or off-topic ramblings. Most essays will include the basic Introduction, Main Body, and Conclusion, though what appears in the introduction and body will differ quite a bit from subject to subject and topic to topic. Some subjects require you to discuss your methodology, others require some form of literature review (esp. Psychology.) Your organization should be based on what is appropriate for your subject as well as what is necessary to help you make your argument.
Research Question: Yes, it will appear on your cover page, but there is an expectation that your research question is stated specifically at several points in your essay. (This should make sense, since your essay should focus on directly addressing that question.)
Vocabulary: Academic vocab, no slang. You should also avoid the use of contractions, which are when two words are combined into one, usually with an apostrophe (e.g. "could not" becomes "couldn't." In your EE, you would write out "could not.") This might not seem major but it could affect your Presentation score (Crit. D.) Examiners are expecting a piece of work that looks academic, and as minor as this may seem the use of improper vocabulary will surely stand out.
When in doubt, think about the text types that you've encountered in English A and English B -- your essay should be written in a style that resembles the more formal texts that you've encountered. More editorial than blog, more letter to the editor than email to a friend. It is also good to consult the sample EEs from your subject to see how they did this (especially if they scored highly.)
All extended essays must include a title page. This page must include:
The DP subject
Your research question
An accurate word count
(Optional) A title for the essay
Should you include a title? Yes. It will look weird without it (but should not affect your score. Do all examiners get that message, though? Hmm... add a title.
You should make the cover page closer to the end of your first draft. In some cases the title page and the table of contents are the LAST things that students do.
Psychology essay cover page
Chinese Lang & Lit essay cover page
This should be the last thing you edit in your EE document. Your page numbers are only finalized once you have finished your writing and editing of the actual essay.
Your Table of Contents must include page numbers for your introduction, the beginning of your main body, your conclusion, as well as your works cited or bibliography. It is fine to label the introduction as "Introduction" and the conclusion as "Conclusion," but do not label the body as "Body." Think of the body as having multiple sections (and maybe sub-sections.) Things like a Literature Review, Background, or a section on a specific topic relevent to your investigation all make for much better labels than just... "Body."
You are also free to include sub-sections in your table of contents -- think of the ToC as a way to reflect the overall organization of your essay.
Bio EE table of contents
Economics EE table of contents
FONT
Use a normal, professional font. Arial, Times New Roman, Avenir, Garamond, Cambria, Verdana, Georgia, Helvetica are all excellent choices.
If you use Comic Sans, I will personally hunt down and destroy three generations of your family.
See how awkward this section of the page looks due to the bizzare gaps and spacing? Yeah, don't do that in your essay :)
SPACING
Originally, double-spacing was used in academic writing when students used typewriters (how many of you have actually seen one of those?) It allowed professors to write notes, on the typed paper, in between the lines.
Double-spacing is still necessary in your EE. The essays are marked digitally, but the examiners still need spaces between the lines of text to insert notes and symbols as part of the grading process. Use double spacing (2.0) to be safe and make things easy for them.
Please, please, please double-check how your document looks when you turn it into a PDF.
IB's expectations are as follows...
Choose a recognized format (MLA, APA, Chicago, Harvard, etc.)
Use that format consistently.
It is also wise to format your document in a way that is appropriate for that style (MLA format is not just citations -- it's also margins, font size, spacing, etc.)
For more, see the page on this site about citations and referencing.
Use the following as a to help aid you in your citations. Remember: when in doubt, it is best to cite.