Plot Structure: FAILED ATTEMPT

NOTES ON PLOT STRUCTURE: FAILED ATTEMPT

The failed attempt is an action done by one of the main characters to try and solve the problem, which ends up failing. It is not the solution itself. The failed attempt comes right after the problem, and it should be a reasonable action to try to solve the problem. 

Example


Failed Attempt: Tried calling your mother to bring it but she did not answer. 


Emotions:

Hopeful, frustrated, anxious, upset, worried


Adverbs:

Hopefully, unfortunately, repeatedly,

loudly, finally, suddenly


Speech:

“Come on, pick up the phone, Mum!” Ben muttered.

“What am I going to do now?” he yelled.


Thoughts:

Will Mum finally answer the phone? How am I going to get the equipment? Will I be able to play without it? 

STUDENT'S WORK

5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 16)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 13)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 7)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 14)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 11)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 15)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 12)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 10)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 9)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 2)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 8)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 1)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 6)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 5)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 4)
5 Perseverance - Failed Attempt (Group 3)