Plot Structure: FAILED ATTEMPT
NOTES ON PLOT STRUCTURE: FAILED ATTEMPT
The failed attempt is an action done by one of the main characters to try and solve the problem, which ends up failing. It is not the solution itself. The failed attempt comes right after the problem, and it should be a reasonable action to try to solve the problem.
Example
Failed Attempt: Tried calling your mother to bring it but she did not answer.
Emotions:
Hopeful, frustrated, anxious, upset, worried
Adverbs:
Hopefully, unfortunately, repeatedly,
loudly, finally, suddenly
Speech:
“Come on, pick up the phone, Mum!” Ben muttered.
“What am I going to do now?” he yelled.
Thoughts:
Will Mum finally answer the phone? How am I going to get the equipment? Will I be able to play without it?
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