Elias is the best soldier at Blackcliff Academy. He has committed himself as loyal to the Empire, though he has always been secretly unwilling to be a pawn of the Empire. He has always dreamed of escaping, though he has never had the nerve, nor the chance. But when an opportunity arises to make him the most powerful soldier in the Empire, he can’t refuse without arousing suspicion. Now, Elias must find a way to get away from the Empire without his fellow soldiers turning on him.
Though Laia and Elias live very different lives, it seems as though their destinies are intertwined. They soon begin to realize that the decisions they make may change the future of the Empire itself.
So far, I am in love with this book. It is usually very difficult for authors to world-build in a way that is actually engaging to readers while being still in-depth, but Tahir does this amazingly. The Empire is based on Ancient Rome, with the soldiers governing all citizens’ ways of life. This brutal society, along with the harsh leadership, makes for an intense and thrilling story, while the main characters attempt to rebel, with their lives on the line.
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As mentioned in my previous review, this story was about two teens (coming from VERY different backgrounds) rebelling against the all-powerful and unforgiving Empire. This premise for the book came with this mentality: it’s us against the world. And that’s exactly how I felt reading this novel. In many parts of the story, I really felt as though I didn’t know who to trust; those who I thought I knew were traitors and those who I thought were evil were soft. So who can I really trust, if nobody ever tells their whole truth? This was--in many ways--a sad, cruel, and heartbreaking story, but it had some incredible messages to accompany it.
Have you ever, when reading a book, pictured every scene like a movie? You can see the characters, the setting, and the tone like it were on the big screen? I do that all the time with novels, though this one was especially movie-like. I could practically feel the hot desert or the cool, quiet air of the village at night. There was a sort of haunting feel this it as well, as readers know the deadly and commanding power of the Empire forces and what they have taken from the people. It is really something that resonates with readers.
If you can’t already tell, this wasn’t a happy story. And perhaps that’s why I am hesitant to rate it higher. . . maybe I need to get over my aversion to reading sad books. Anyhow, this book did not shy away from difficult topics. Illuminating violence, corruption of power, and turning friends against friends can do nothing but pull at the heartstrings of readers. The most tragic moments of this book were the many times where--put simply--the "best" man won. In this world, it did not matter if you left 100 dead people in your wake; once you made it to the top, you were destined to be there. Not to mention the helplessness those people felt in these situations; it was either to kill or be killed-- or, in other cases, kill or have your dearest friends or family killed. This tension and conflict that main characters Laia and Elias felt I thought that I felt, too, and I felt their pain in their indecision between duty and their morals. This theme even carries on to everyday life. Though you may not have to make the decision between your life and your most trusted companion’s life (as what happens countless times in this book), every one of us has had to make tough decisions about our so-called “destiny” or what we actually felt was right, and this correlation is a great recurring theme found in this story. While I wish I could explain the complex nature of these traumatic moments in the book, I feel as though it is best to leave that to read (and interpret) yourself.
Let’s move on to characters. This was another one of the great points in Tahir’s writing: both of these characters had well-defined strengths, flaws, and internal conflicts, which contributed to the story. Additionally, even though this book was told from two POVs (Laia and Elias), the author still did a fantastic job of developing each character completely and equally. The character arcs were simply amazing: both main characters (and even many background characters) showed development over the course of the story. Take Laia: Laia has always felt like the cowardly one. Born to two of the Resistance’s most powerful leaders and courageous rebels known to the Empire, she has always felt like she could never measure up to her parent’s legacy. This wasn’t just in her head, either. Numerous times, Laia has been shown her weaknesses plainly and bluntly, causing people to lose their confidence in her. However, this is where Laia’s determinism is proven. When she can’t get the people she needs for her cause to trust her, she proves herself worthy. She does anything possible to show the people needed that she is worth their trust, no matter the cost.
Similarly, Elias also has the responsibility to live up to his mother, the Commander of Blackcliff Academy. Also known as the most ruthless, vicious, and unforgiving warrior known to the Academy. However, Elias doesn’t want to be like her. He doesn’t want to live a life of cruelty and violence; he wants to be free from it. However, all those around him expect him to be great. He is the Commander’s son, after all. With both Laia and Elias facing similar challenges, it can be understood how these two characters came together eventually, even with their very different stories. Another thing that I loved about the characters in this book was their extensive backgrounds. I felt as though Tahir did not miss a single detail; every single one of the background characters has their own story to tell, and I find that a very significant detail of this story. Not only this, but they even had their own character arcs and developments. Every single character was changed in some form over the course of the book. We even got the story behind some of the evilist and most cruel characters in the books *cough, cough, Commander*, and why they were who they had become. (The Commander’s backstory--given at the end of the novel--though tragic-- did not in any way justify the state of her character and morals. . .) The depth that Tahir gave her characters was part of what made this book great.
Aaaand on that note, on to my critiques! First of all, let’s establish this fact: this book was a romance novel. And yes, while I love a great romance novel, I honestly felt like that aspect took away from the original premise of this book. Let me explain: the romance between Laia and Elias was expected (I mean, they are the two main characters of the book), but I didn’t want it to happen. Simply put, it was unbelievable. They hardly knew each other, they kept endless secrets from one other, and they just didn’t seem to fit in my mind. On top of this was my biggest pet peeve in the history of romance novels: the dreadful love triangle. Oh wait, no, it was a love square. That’s right, Tahir went where no other author has and made TWO love interests for BOTH characters. And here’s the sad part: they both didn’t end up with the one I wanted them to. The two other members of this square were Keenan, a leader in the Resistance, and Helene, Elias’ best friend of around 12 years. Now, you tell me who sounds like the better love interest for Keenan: a fierce warrior girl who has had his back and protected his honor for all of his years at Blackcliff, or a random slavegirl who he just happened to see in passing one day and somehow fell head over heels for? Sorry, Laia, but I think Helene wins in this situation. In my opinion, the relationship between Laia and Elias was great. I think that the bond they shared, despite coming from incredibly different backgrounds, was a great way to illustrate their shared struggles and morals. However, I honestly think there was no reason to add in this romance factor. While their friendship was understandable, this romance never should have happened.
Finally, my last critique about this novel would have to be the false resolutions in this book. By false resolutions, I mean the fact that every big plot twist was never how it seemed. It always seemed like Tahir would make some big statement about a major plot change, such as a character's death, and then come back two chapters later saying PSYCH! It didn’t really happen, and it was all an illusion. It really got to the point where I couldn’t believe anything that was happening anymore. Did this really happen, or is the author trying to fool me again? While this kind of shock factor may actually contribute to the story once or twice, the fact that every point was riddled with loopholes made me reconsider every event that occurred.
All in all, this story really was great. Besides the questionable romances and random plot twists, this story illustrated a savage society and honest world that takes readers back to Ancient Rome. So, with that, I’ll close out with my favorite quote of the book, which I felt really illustrated the brutal nature of the Empire: “All the beauty of the stars means nothing when life here on earth is so ugly.”