WALT:
- Address a letter correctly.
- Organise our ideas into paragraphs
1000 Nemo Street
Hamilton
9th March 2020
Dear Marlen
I would like to thank you for your support during our time at Aongatete Lodge. Your leadership, experience and skill in the bush helped to provide an exciting and challenging outdoor experience for Room 7.
We had a great time at camp. My favourite activities were the orienteering and the Burma trail. I was very impressed with the teamwork the students showed in communicating effectively and using their compasses accurately to find their way back to camp. Before the Burma trail, I was concerned that some of the class would be too scared of the dark to have a go at it. Obviously the experience they had gained during the previous night challenges paid off, as they all made their way safely around the course. I was most impressed by the bravery of those that did it on their own. It was a valuable experience for everyone to gain confidence in the bush, in the dark.
I hope that these experiences will inspire our students to spend more time in the outdoors in the future. They all seem to have enjoyed themselves and speak positively of their time at camp.
Thank you again for your help.
Yours sincerely,
Dory
Key Questions:
What information is in each paragraph?