Email to a teacher

Correction of the email:

My name is Pamela Erices, one of your second year student in Communicative Competences, section 1.

I am writing to you to let you know that I finished my biography and the comment as well. I would like to ask you if you could see it and make the final correction before uploading it next Thursday.

Sincerely,

Pamela Erices Terán