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Synthesis Essay 1: Argue whether or not Arthur Miller's portrayal of Tituba was historically accurate.
Synthesis Essay 1: Argue whether or not Arthur Miller's portrayal of Tituba was historically accurate.
Handwritten Draft and Initial Feedback
Handwritten Draft and Initial Feedback
In my essay I argued that Miller's portrayal of Tituba was infact inaccurate, I used examples of how she treated the children, her Arawak background, and Miller altering the play.
Typed and Revised
Typed and Revised
I made revisions to my first, second, and conclusion paragraphs. While doing so, I added more details to my body paragraphs to help the reader better understand my argument and to strengthen the sophistication of my conclusion. I learned how well I could truly write a synthesis essay and what areas I still needed to work on.
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