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Task information
Part 1 is a compulsory task.
You have to write an essay of 220-260 words.
The question consists of a statement of the topic, three bullet points relating to the topic, and three opinions, referring back to each of the bullet points in turn.
You must only write about two of the bullet points in the question.
You may use the opinions presented in the question, but you can deal with the bullet points using ideas of your own.
You must explain which of your two bullet points you consider to be more important/effective/useful... giving reasons for your opinion.
Remember that you are writing an essay, so your style of writing should be neutral or formal rather than informal.
- Criteria
The people who mark your writing - for both Parts 1 and 2 - ask themselves a number of questions about your work. Match each of their questions (1-6) with the aspect of language that it is focusing on (A-F).
Does the answer cover all the necessary points?
Does the answer contain a lot of language errors?
Does the answer use a variety of words and structures?
Is the answer written in clear, well-connected paragraphs?
Is the answer in an appropriately formal or informal style?
Would the answer have the right effect on the reader?
A. Organisation
B. Language - range
C. Register
D. Content (dealing with the necessary points).
E. Communicative achievement
F. Language - accuracy
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D
F
B
A
C
E
2. Range
2. Range
This piece of writing has a poor mark for range. Change the underlined words to more interesting words, adding to or expanding on them, in order to gain better marks.
I would recommend that you choose Brown's Hotel for your holiday. We had a (1) great time there last year. The rooms were (2) beautiful, the food was (3) good and the staff were very (4) nice too. It's central so (5) you can walk to lots of interesting places.
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enjoyable
spacious and attractively furnished
delicious
helpful
there are plenty of shops, museums, theatres and other tourist attractions within easy walking distance
Here are some PDFs that can help you to boost your range of vocabulary.
4. Signposts
4. Signposts
These words will help us write an essay by signaling the objective of each paragraph. Solve the following exercise to find more about them.
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5. Linking expressions
5. Linking expressions
Some linking expressions are used at the beginning of a sentence, but some are not. Choose the correct words from the options.
In the city, there are more places to go. Also / Too, they stay open later.
Working in a coal mine is a hard job. Furthermore / As well, it can be dangerous.
Travelling by train is more relaxing than driving. It is better for the environment, besides / too.
You have to find somewhere to play. As well / As well as that, you need to buy all the sports equipment.
In winter, the nights are much longer. Too / In addition, it is a lot colder then.
Making your own furniture is an enjoyable hobby. It saves money, as well / in addition.
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Also
Furthermore
too
As well as that
In addition
as well
6. Sample answers
6. Sample answers
Look at the following link to get an idea of some essay samples and the feedback they get.
7. It's your turn
7. It's your turn
Your teacher will now share with you a shared document where you and your partners will write your essay.
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